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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovley, this Severus is quite juvenile.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love this story. It is so well thought out and well written. The relationship is developing in a realistic and enjoyable way. More, please!
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I have tears in my eyes now. That was so beautiful. You have done such a lovely job building the relationship and the emotions surrounding it. Wonderful.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful!!!lapplapping and whistling\" Encore! Encore! I think that was just lovely! And I hope you can update again! You really made my weekend!
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful chapter. I\'ve got goosebumps. Very sensual and romantic. Please update soon.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve already gushed about your storytelling abilities and your characterization, so now I\'ll move on to your writing style.
\" ...a tide of exquisite satisfaction\"
sigh You do lovely things with the English language. Keep up the good work.
\" ...a tide of exquisite satisfaction\"
sigh You do lovely things with the English language. Keep up the good work.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18...... This was BEAUTIFUL, touching, sweet & VERY WELL WRITTEN!!! I am so glad that she heard at least part of what he said at the end!!! Til chapter 19, Deb >^..^<
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nosy staff members- too funny.
Ohh that WAS SO ROMANTIC!
I just turned to mush.
A rose to you my dear.
Ohh that WAS SO ROMANTIC!
I just turned to mush.
A rose to you my dear.
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a wonderful chapter! This is so well-written, and you\'ve taken things slowly enough to be believable. Loved the lemons!!
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January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooo! Absolutely delicious!! The scene was led into beautifully and naturally, and the sex itself was both tastefully done and quite hot. : )
Kiri
Kiri