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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person Droxy
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love thiset ret romatic fic. hermione is a lucky gal. LOL

But this chapter leaves me with a sense of forboding...I hope Sev\'s death eater instincts kick on this.

Although I hope there is more angst to go reinforce the sweetness. I can\'t wait to see those Malfoy bastards and watch Sev hex the the liviging daylights out of him.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The note from home sounds ominous, somehow -- but that could just be my paranoid nature. lol

A truly heartwarming chapter, and a joy to read.


Kiri
person Heather
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh Oh! I wonder what\'s up. I am really enjoying the way these two have decided to get to know each other over the holiday. I love my kids dearly, and Christmas isn\'t really Christmas until you see your babies\' faces light up in the morning, but I miss those cozy, no-obligations to anyont eat each other type Christmases.

*drinking a cup of hot chocolate while reading*

Thanks for the warm and fuzzies!
Heather
person Mel
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!!

You have taken a very \"outdated\" concept (forced or arranged marriages) and painted a very contemporary picture of it; furthermore, you have developed the plot and the characters very plausibly, making the entire situation seem genuine. What stands out especially is the amount of ambivalence and timidity that both Hermione and Snape are experiencing as they make the best of a bad show.
I imagine that what they are going through is quite similar to what people of centuries past endured as they entered into their arranged marriages. Well done, a truly fine piece of work.

NOW HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!! :)
person iloveron
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story,write the nxt chapie soon please
person spaz141
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Emotional, wonderful and beautifully written. Thanks.
person Sarah T.
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an incredible chapter. I can\'t wait for more. Thanks
person Severus Snapes Princess
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasse say its not over...... so good..... lol
,mmmmmmmmm severus
person Svenja
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, it\'s great, I really love your story! I hope you\'ll update soon! Could you mail me when a new chappie is up?
person Rosmerta
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a delightful story! I am really enjoying this. I love the thought of Severus and Hermione spending a Christmas holiday snuggling ... and doing other things! ;) One worry: won\'t people see them together in Hogsmeade gossgossip? ... I await the next chapters!!