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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person Star
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*GASP* ! ! ! ! A cliffhanger, how cruel! I have so many questions! Why did Malfoy target Hermione\'s grandmother? How is he using surveillance? How does Snape feel that Hermione heard him say he was falling in love with her? WHAT are the Grangers going to say?!?!

I will be on PINS AND NEEDLES waiting for the next update! This is so great, I\'m completely hooked!

(I just used an excessive number of exclamation points) (!!!!!)

Hee, hee, hee
person spaz141
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor grandma. I\'m scared now. I think her parents are doing pretty good, I\'m guessing an explosion of emotion for the next chapter? Love this story, thanks.
person Droxy
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow another update so soo. Mucho Thanks!
person Michelle
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m only on Chapter 14, but I wanted to write a note about how much I enjoy your story. I enjoy your characterization of Severus as well. I always doubted he was a sex god..thought him more of that shy guy hehe. :)
person azulkan2
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Really liked this part. Ca wai wait to see what happens when they get back from the hospital.
person PaganPoetry
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much! I found this story just now when I really should haven won working. Ah well reading this was a much more pleasant option. So I sat anad aad all 21 chapters and am at this point cursing that there are no more. Hope to have more soon! :D
person JustJeanette
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just a note to say I really love the skillful way you weave this story. I find myself re-reading often and am alway put in mind of Kaz\'s \'Falling Further In\'. I can not wait till the enxt update, but I must.

J
person WizardingAngel
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderfull chapters and a great wy to end that last chapter in the arms of Sever......... Keep up the great work
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 20 & 21... HOW is it that Lucius knows everything that is going on between Severus & Hermione? (I know I\'ll find out in a future chapter, but I\'m so curious!!!) I can understand why Severus was distant at dinner!!!

So far the visit to the parents have proved to be uncomfortable, but enlightening!!! I can\'t wait to see how balistic her parents become when they find out YTHIYTHING!!! Also looking forward to seeing if Severus can restore Grandma\'s memories about the accident!!!

Til chapter 22, Deb >^..^<
person Kiristeen
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooo! The inlaws! LOLOLOL Can\'t wait.

Oh, and I have to agree with Snape, the timing of the accident is just a little *too* convenient to be truly an accident. I suppose only time will tell -- well, and you, when you deem it the right time. : )


Kiri