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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person Redone
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very very very very good! I\'m so hooked.
person Midnight Tiger
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This Chapter was AMAZING! i cannot help but re-read several parts just because it was so wonderful! my heart was fluttering and i felt light headed because of the emotion and the...beauty of it! bloody wonderful! I have to take a break from the story (have to drive home from work) but then im right back at it!!!!! cant wait! i think the kiss was wonderful, so realc, ac, and then the end, is SO true! i\'ve done that a few times!!! wonderful! thank you so much for posting this!
person midnight tiger
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! well done, tasteful, and so sweet!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22.... I hope that after what Mr. granger has just heard that he will be a bit more understanding of his daughter!!! I\'m sure that it will upset him a bit to know how she feels that she isn\'t home, but he will have to accept the fact that she is a married woman now & not his little girl anymore!!! I am glad that her mother is at least making an effort!!!

I am anxious to find out what the healers & Kingsley find out about what happened to Hermione\'s grandmother!!! Lucius will get his in the end!!!

Til chapter 23, Deb >^..^<
person ~~ ** Lady Tuesday **~~
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous as usual. Can\'t wait for the next installment.
person buttercup
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m running out of adjectives to describe how much I\'m enjoying this story. Suffice to say, I can\'t wait for more!
person midnight Tiger
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! this was a WONDERFUL chapter! i truly enjoyed the ceramony and the binding spell. so lovely! i want my wedding to be like that! :)
im really enjoying your story thus far and liked this chapter so much i had to review! thank you for posting it!

Harmony
person Rosmerta
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific chapter! The way you handled the Grangers and their feelings was very realistic. And now you\'ve made me wonder what canon Hermione has told her parents - if anything! - about Voldemort and everything that\'s happening in the magical world. I can easily see that her parents would want to take her away from Hogwarts if they knew the whole truth....
person kiristeen
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! So very bittersweet and so well done! The last two chapters were great. Loved the touch at the end of the last one with her father hg heg heard the convo between the two of them.



Kiri
person scifichick774
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* I can only hope that her father will be enlightened by the conversation rather than enraged. More soon please.