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::sighs theatrically:: As severus said, \"I have no words.\" Very well done!!


kiri

She had a woollen jumper on with only a bra beneath? Itch!

This is such a great story. I loved the last chapter. Please write more. I can hardly wait!

Can I cry? Is that allowed?

I found this fic off of WIKTT and have enjoyed it immensely so far. I usually would have reviewed at the end of what is posted, but now seemed like a good time for that. The thing that caught me was Severus\'s birthday, March 13, which also happens to be my birthday. It took me about three times reading the date over to figure it out and that is when I decided to review. So on with the review...
You have an absolutely amazing story! The characters are nearly perfectly in character. Snape is absolutely wonderful! I have seen some people portray completely out of wack in a few of the marriage law fics, but you have him nailed down perfectly. Hermione is just as equally well done. I really enjoyed the whole section you did after they had consumated the marriage. The emotions were incredibly realistic. I understood exactly how she felt and it was very similar to what I had felt after loosing my virginity just after my 17th birthday. For me both parties were completely willing and are still highly devoted to each other. You had the denial part perfect and that you just feel different. I remember spending at least a week if not longer trying to accept the fact that I was no longer a virgin. I really appreciate that someone got it right. Thanks for being the one to do that. I also liked the gentleness of the emotions that you have in this fic. Its completely unrushed and you can feel them falling in love. The pacing is perfect for youyle.yle. Its nice and slow and doesn\'t rush into everythign too fast. Out of all the fics that I have read dealing with this challenge, yours is by far one of my favorites. Awesome job!

All I can tell you is that I\'m still waiting for the scene when Hermione has to explain all this.

This is great, well written, descriptive and the narrative develpoment is moving along well (not to mention all the lovely lemony bits!). Please update soon as I\'d love to read more.

This chapter was so intense I had to read it twice. Hopefullrmiormione\'s dad will come around. Thanks.

I was just going to review all of this when I finish reading it but I had to say that I LOVED that ritual fo Ron. It was so emotional and well thought out. Well done. Off I go to the next Chapter.

wonderful wonderful! i love id cad cant wait for more! sorry that this is going to be short, i broke my glasses right around chapter 19. LOL cant see! the ending bit was so tender and sweet. i cant wait to see Greg\'s reaction and i hope lucious gets stuck in the end. ::hugs:: thank you so much for posting.