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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person joyce
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So it\'s three a.m. and i\'ve got a seven thirty class...and what am I doing but up reading? I loved this story. The characters are so well done, and the romace perfectly rendered. I loved it. Please, PLEASE update soon!

many thanks,
joyce
person droxy
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your last chapter with the cold weather is nothing short of brilliant for the imagery department. Coming from Chicago, I remember winter days like this and I felt the cold.

More kissing please ;>

person Michelle
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gosh. I love how you have left him so Snapey but still added a tenderness to him that comes from being in love. My husband was very Snape like when I first met him, and being in love changed him. :-) It\'s so nice to see a writer reflecting that.

person Midnight Tiger
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! damn that Draco for being a pain! and Poor Crooks and his unhappy wakeup call....i wouldnt mind having Sevi wake me up but then again... im human...and a girl...LOL gonderful chapter and thanks SO much for updating! i so love this story and always am so excited when i see the next chapter!
person buttercup
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. I can\'t wait to see what Draco has up his sleeve. You\'ve done such a great job building the relationship between Severus and Hermione. I\'m always amazed at how authentic the emotions are in this story. Excellent job.
person nocturnus
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Would you think that Hermione mind sharing her husband with me?. He is adorable in this fic
person Rosmerta
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione! Oh well, the news was bound to get out sooner or later. ... I love how she and Severus read to each other. Too bad Christmas holidays couldn\'t last longer! I\'m sure they both feel that way right now.... :)
person Anon
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25... I really think that you did a FABULOUS job on this chapter!!! I\'m sure that both Severus & Hermione wish that their holiday never ended!!! You brought everyone back together very well, conflicts & all!!! Leave it to Draco to be a MAJOR pain in the (_!_) & have to try to start trouble as soon as he got back!!!

After everyone in the school finds out about Severus & Hermione will she be able to go back to staying with eacheach nig I t I think that would be so helpful for her, giving her that extra comfort she needs!!! Til chapter 26, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That review was from me*
person Droxy
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the pacing of this sweet romance. Why oh why to I continue to read chapter 16 over and over again??? ;>.

You write perfect kisses.

In India there are more arranged marriages. I met a groom on a plane, he had never met his bride to be. He asked me for advice and the first thing that popped into my head was this story. My advice? take it slow and let her set the pace.. long story but your romance reminds me of the most positive outcome of something like one of these arranged marriages.

Think about it, your fanfic and my reading it may have affected the life of some poor girl, hopefully for the better.

2 dozen virtual red roses to you.