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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on completing your story!! And many thanks for completing it, too! As a person who loves to read the SS/HG ship, it is rather disheartening when many well written, entertaining stories are abandoned by their authors. From now on people who read your story will read it with delight through to the end rather than be disappointed that it was good, but incomplete. Love the Marriage Law stories, loved your version of it.
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This literary masterpiece has completely 'ensnared my senses'. The gently developing relationship, the dependancy they have for each other, the pain, the emotion, the love and the laughter mixed with the tears have given me a thoroughly wonderful afternoons escapism. I've laughed at the imagery, I've wept at the sorrow and hardship you've given to your characters. There are not enough superlatives to lavish on this fic. Can I be really cheeky though? How about a sequel? You know, maybe a couple of years after she gains her masters? Maybe with the introduction of a 'little' Snapelet? *flutters eyelashes innocently*
Blessings to you and chocolate cookies for your muse!
Amethystique x
person Citten
schedule May 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it seem sad to let it end. this was a great and fun story and i truly enjoyed every moment of it! i do hope that you will write a sequel but even if you dont...well i will live. :) until the next time!
person sbrande
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I loved ever minute of this wonderful fic. Sonia :)
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank You so much for coming back to this story. Once I reread ch 42 I recalled that it had been a favorite and wondered why it had gone unfinished, as unfortunately so many good stories do. I'll look forward to reading the Epilogue.
person SandraF
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good. My question is... is this all of it, or is there more?
person Eiri Yuki
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon, I love it so far.
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Amethystique
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a delicious fic! I've had to read the whole thing in one sitting...I even ate my dinner in front of my computer!!! Please update soon. The character interaction is compelling, the insecurities of both Hermione and Severus are incredible. I have had real pangs of emotion for their troubles and angst. Feed your muse and mail me with the update PLEASE????? LOL ;o)X
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i was wondering if that is the end of the story?