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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person Midnight Tiger
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmm, such a wonderful chapter. i really liked how it all worked out, and cant wait to see the private tutor sessions. :)
things just keep getting better, if more complicated and im really enjoying the story, your ideas and your wonderful writting style. Thanks so much for postinnd ind i look forward to more!
person KarenDetroit
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Was very distressed to read that Snape escorted Hermione \"discretely\" to her rooms: he must have needed a basket to carry all the pieces. Of course, if he\'d done it \"discreetly\", no one would have been the wiser, she she wou't h't have been dismembered. Love the story, by the way.
person Hawklaw
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a cold, nasty, snowy day here, so I\'ve spent it re-reading this story from the beginning. I have to say that as enjoyable as the individual chapters are, it is truly extraordinary when viewed in its entirety (or as much \'entirety\' as a WIP can have :) It holds together so vwellwell, and you have developed the relationship in a natural manner. I love this story, and cannot wait for further updates.
person Michelle
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love it when you update. This is such a cute story.
person excessivelyperky
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous new chapter! The relationship between Hene ane and Severus just deepens and gets better as the story proceeds. Basking in the delight, and waiting for more.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26~Technicalities... Leave it to the Malfoy\'s to be a pain in Severus & Hermione\'s backsides!!! I hope it was a slap in Lucius\' face when Severus & Hermione were not removed from the school or their positions!!!

I do like how much better they are getting along & the fact that Albus is making every effort for them!!! I will be looking forward to chapter 27, Deb >< D<
person jordy
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione! Being evicted from her house. Is she going to move her rooms in with Severus???
person spaz141
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah the Malfoy\'s spoilers they are. Great chapter, thanks.
person buttercup
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me with your ability to create mental images. Poor Hermione, losing her house. The scene with Dumbledore in the floo, fantastic. Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
person SOLISFLOS
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I read all that you had so far in one sitting. I couldnt \"put it down\". You have a great imagination and your writing is fab.
Keep me informed of updates!