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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person spaz141
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* wonderful...thanks.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30... Glad to see you\'re back, I\'ve missed this sto! I! I am very much enjoying how their relationship has grown!!! They are still showing that it is somewhat new whaile at the same time are becoming more comfortable with each other!!! I really like how you wrote Severus in this chapter!!! He is the supportive husband while also being the teacher that leads her to see thinrom rom a different perspective!!! I also very much enjoy the way you write their sharing of each other as well!!! I think you have done a WONDERFUL job of creating their relationship!!! As always I will be looking forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 31, Deb >^..^<
person Moaning Myrtle
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely! The lemons were very juicy and included just enough sugar.

I think I especially love Hermione\'s reaction to her apprenticeship letters -- quintessential over-achiever! All but one were glowing and another yet to come and all she can focus on is the negative. Couldn\'t BE any more Hermione-esque.

Glad you\'ve crawled out from under the pile of four letter word (work, of course; what else could I mean? *blinks innocently*). Do carry on.
person ancientgirl
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for updating this. I was hoping this wasn\'t one of those wonderful fics that never gets an ending. I can understand about being buried beneath tons of work. I hope you can give us more updates. I\'m wondering though. If Hermione gets an apprentiship then would she have to be away from Severus? I\'m hoping they don\'t.
person midnight Tiger
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
simply delightful!!! another wonderful update hun, and doesnt it just figure that Albus would intend to come down just as they are getting...cozy? LOL i am truly enjoying this story and every update makes it better and better! thanks so much for posting and by the way, i think her reaction to the letters was bang on and well done!

person Sarah
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is flowing. Your lucid writing style is captivating. Is this the end? I suppose I could see that, as we\'re given an idea of how they will sort of end up, but I would be very pleased if we were to get more :-). Please? Pretty please??
person Anon
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update this :) I love it so...
person Slytherin Secret
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry I haven\'t reviewed for ages. I never got around to adding this story to my favourites (although that has been resolved now) and then I forgot about it due to other things. I can\'t believe how much I missed. I have just read it all now and caught up. I had forgotten how good this was and I\'m still really enjoying it :o) I hope Lucius gets his comeuppance soon, and what\'s going to happen with Draco? Any more fireworks there? I hope so; he\'s so fantastic at winding people up. The way you write Hermione and Snape is wonderful; the conflict of emotions, the arguing and the love is all very well described. Please keep up the good work and I\'ll make sure I keep up with reading it. Until next time, Slytherin Secret.
person Droxy
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no a kiss cliffy. Smoke billows out of my ears like pepper up at the fact I was denied a kiss I was sssoooooooo anticipating. Very evil of you! I am holding backthe virtual rose until that kiss dammit. ;>

Glad to see Snape quitting teaching, he was so miserable at it. Enjoying the dialog and I am glad they resolved their problems.

Snape and HG house huntingw inw interesting.
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I\'m glad they resolved their argument. I think it\'s weet how you have Severus consultaing with Hermione about his future plans. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.

Tiffany