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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person ancientgirl
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I\'m so glad you updated this. Their potential house sounds great, even though it seems to need a lot of work, but hey like Severus said, \"that\'s what wands are for.
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person spaz141
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*smile* nice chapter, reads like a nice house too. Still my favourite, thanks for updating.
person Hawklaw
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Words cannot convey how much I love this story. Your writing ability is superb, your characterization extraordinary, and your creativity amazing. It makes my day every time I see a new chaper. Please keep writing this marvelous story.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31... Things seem to really be falling into place now, her apprenticeship, a house, their relationship, all seems to be going very well!!! I look forward to seeing what they do with the house as well as finding out how much of a pain her new mentor will be;-) Til chapter 32, Deb >^..^<
person Michelle
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I always love it when you update!! Such a great story.
person azulkan2
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see the update. Great story. Glad they found a house. Looking forward to more soon.
person excessivelyperky
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A yummy, lemony chapter--and how wonderful that Hermione trusts Severus enough that she doesn\'t always _have_ to be controlled. Same for him, too. And the way he reassures her--sigh, how lovely! Glad to see you back. Now, you get some rest there, too, even if it takes a bit longer for the next chapter, all right?
person Droxy
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating. I needed a nice romance injection since I\'ve been reading lots of angst lately.
So sweet and romantic, it makes me feel like warm syrup. I can\'t help but smile at these parts.

I like the dialog between these two when they get romantic.

Virtual red roses to you.
person crissy
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ashfordly sounds like another severus. i\'m sure hermione will get along with him splendidly.
person buttercup
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was nice. You write the most delicious lemons...sweet and tangy. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!