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for The Ties that Lead to Trust

by GoldenFeather

person Bambu
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And we had been so complacent, hadn\'t we. Wonderful cliffhanger. I wonder which one it was pere or fils?
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was enjoying a nice pleasant chapter; harry was getting almost engaged, one of the twins was in love, Hermione\'s parents are coming around, and THEN...THE CLIFFHANGER!

Yeah, I know. Who am I to talk.

Loved the chapter. Can wait for more. And I mean I REALLY can\'t wait.
person Eire
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Urgh! Great ending! Of course, you realize, you\'ll have to update immediately. As always, great piece - can\'t wait for the next bit. Literally.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 32... I am so glad that Hermione\'s father wrote to her!!! That really had to be quite a relfor for her!!!

It\'s so sweet how much Harry feels for Ginny!!! I also like how George wanted Hermione\'s advice about Meg!!! I am curious though... does Pig\'s return have any connection to the Stupify that was thrown at Hermione & George?!? What\'s going to happen... Can\'t wait to find out!!! Til chapter 33, Deb >^..^<
person droxy
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow aer uer update =D.

A cliffy too, oh good. A promise of action.. evil Malfoy action I hope.

Good dialog in this chapter. I also like how you describe events (studying, tests, etc.) to fill in the \"time gaps\" as the story moves forward. It makes it much more logical and beleivable.

Very much enjoying this story. As usual, more kissing please. =>

person mchellin78
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you can\'t do that! omg! everything was sweet and calm and now this! who did that! what\'s goin on! UPDATE SOON!
person Midnight Tiger
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY!!! who is it? Draco? Lucius? maybe someone else...but i cant think of who... Oh cant wait for more!!!
Loved Harry\'s ring for Gin and George\'s girlfriend sounds to be a wonderful addition to the weasley family. :)
oh what a place to leave it...::sigh:: thanks so much for post
Mid
person crissy
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
who!?! who? who? who was the voice from behind? who? tell me now!
person crissy
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
who!?! who? who? who was the voice from behind? who? tell me now!
person LadyTuesday
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!! And I thought that I had evil cliffhangers!!! Bwuahahahahaha

Good work again, of course ... can\'t wait for the next installment.

~~ ** Lady Tuesday ** ~~