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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
100 points to Severus for helping her start to trust again
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least you apologized first! No really, that was so sad, but no apologies are necessary. Except maybe to Hermione. And Snape. I\'m REALLY looking forward to seeing the Malfoys get whats coming to them! They will, won\'t they??? Looking forward to the next update...
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful chapter. Well done.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you writing from experience? Thimes mes across as real and raw, its scarey. Thanks.
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You handled the past two chapters beautifully. In scenes that could easily have gone so very wrong, you kept charcharacters realistic, in character, and wrote with great sensitivity. It was especially nice to see Severus begin to restore Hermione\'s control over herself by asking permission for every action. Again, wonderfully done.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God poor Hermone! I hope they can get her face back to normal, after all she wasn\'t a willing participant and was raped so she should not be expected to pay the price for infedelity. Please update soon.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even if this is a welitteitten chapter, I\'m a little disapoint by the turns of the events. It was like \"No, not another rape fic\", I trust a lot your writting skills, so I was waiting for something more complex. But let wait the next chapter and see where are you heading.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs* Poor Hermione. Severus is impressive, though. I notice he takes her to her own Head Girl rooms (with the hippogriff painting) giving her privacy, and then tells her he loves her. Good for Severus! I\'m sure the vengeance against Malfoys will come after he tends to his wife. Hmmm...
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, you nailed Hermione\'s emotions perfectly....in fact a bit to perfect. I am glad that Draco is suffering from the same blisters as she is, he definatly deserves to have them where he does. I am anxiously waiting to see how you have Hermione recover from this, I really hope that it is as realistic as this chapter was.
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why did this have to happen? *sniff* it takes years to recover from rape. Scarey and very sad. uhhh, thanks for the update.