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Chapter 33... Before I go on to chapter 34 I just wanted to say that I think you did a very nice job writing such a sad & hurtful subject!!! You wrote Hermione with feeling & gave compassion to the people that helped her!!! I do hope that Hermione will be able to open up to Severus & that the Ministry will take care of the undeserved pain she is in becaus of the Adulterous spell!!!

I do hope that both of the Malfoy\'s get what they deserve!!! If we are lucky Draco will have his pecker fall off & go to Azkaban as a female!!! Better yet, I hope that Severus gets to them 1st!!! Now on to chapter 34, Deb >^..^<

Thanks for updating so fast.

Still expecting SS to explode sometime soon.

Very sad and angsty.

I almost cried a little there.

Loving this story, looking forward to more.

Well the rape makes perfect sense in terms of escallating what she\'s fighting against. It was vicious and understandable, given the standard Draco Malfoy response to things. I imagine the next chapter will be terribly difficult. Thank heavens for such magical things as pensieves, and other things. I can\'t believe the horrible boils on her face -- talk about adding insult to injury.

Wow! You did it again. I was lulled into happily ever-after (almost) and wham. I just hope you have a chapter where Severus reams/tortures/maims the Malfoys. He wasn\'t a Deatheater for nothing.

Thank you

Oh, my God, how horrible for Hermione. What a well-written chapter about her pain and distrust, and how Severus is probably bleeding inside for having failed to ect ect her. How well he is re-establishing those ties of trust, as well.

Sorry. Have to mop my face again. (blows nose)

Oo. I hope that Malfoy gets it!! Poor Sevvy and Hermione. :(

How very lovely and caring that was. I wish that sort of compassion and insight was more available in the real world.

My heart is breaking. Poor Hermione. Snape\'s sensitivity and understanding are so endearing in this chapter. Oh, I do hope they both get a chance at revenge.

Heather

OOH Damn! You should be sorry!!

Oh no this is not good at all, no no no.

However , it is good have very evil Malfoys, Malfoys should be evil to the core and they most certainly are here. Black liliies for evil Malfoys.

We didn\'t get to see Severus\'s reaction in full. Is the revenge laden inner death eater going to go vigalante and take it out on our lovely evil Malfoys? I will have to wait (and I hope so becasue the Malfoys can\'t get away with this behavior).

However, I hate to see this sweet SS/HG relationship shattered like this (frowns), poor SS loses so much and HG is suffering. It is very clear I am going to have to wait some time for more romantic kissing - and that\'s not good at all. But I am torn because this story had to turn darker to meet the challenge requirements. Excellent suspense and pacing. Keep up the good work and update soon.