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April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry, and I rarely ever feel the need to say this, however - that was probably the most pathetic \'adult\' story I\'ve read in a very long time. No build up, no tension. It was completely implausible. You could have gone mwaysways with this plot, cliched though it is, and made it hot. His *crotch* area? Good God. Please do some research into writing erotica before you inflict your stories on us again. I\'m even willing to point you in the right directions, if it would help to develop your writing.
Sing
Sing
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm interesting
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January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this story is going! I hope that you\'ll continue adding to it! :) Let me know when you do! You\'re doing a great job so far! :)
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH come ON MORE!!!!PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm very interesting. Like it so far, update soon plz :)
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Rushed and generally bad, but with potential to be half not-bad. With extreme surgery.
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAA no you cant end it there!!!!! how cruel of you not to update after that!!!! haha. but seriously this is good. i love d/h fics so hurry and update!!! love the plot idea. keep up the good work.
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG
Reminds me of my fisrt time, hahahahaha.!!!
Reminds me of my fisrt time, hahahahaha.!!!
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December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now, I\'m not a typical reader of Hermione/Draco, but oddly enough this one caught my attention. I thwhatwhat I liked about this one was that Draco was portrayed in a different light. Softer, than what most I\'ve seen go for. I hope to read more. So let me know when you\'ve updated.
~Lenna
~Lenna