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by Schlange

person Reikai
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought Ron was supposed to be prefect o.o, and I don\'t think butterbeer is alchoalic....
person Some dude
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to finish this fic? really interestinclincluding a drunk harry.
person Sky
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You need to read the definition of a comma. Other than that, it\'s ok. You just need to work on your storytelling and writing and make the chapter much much longer. Should be about 2000 words or 3 if you can.
person Raven
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good idea - carry it on n i think that the book shud b porn or the karma sutra or sumet disguised.
im waiting for more lol
luv Ravn x