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for When It Rains

by NiniGrl

person Sherrafina
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVIN\' this!! It really has potential to be a really GREAT read!! Keep up the good work:)
person Thursdayschild
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and am han out out for the next update. Don\'t take too long! ;-) I like the way you have matured Hermione, and Devlin has me intrigued. He seems like such a cool mix of Hermione and Severus.

Update Soon!!!!!

Cheers
Thursdayschild
person leylia
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such an awesome story!! I think the idea behind the story is very original and you really know how to draw out each character\'s personality so well! I can\'t wait until you post your next chapter!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3..... You really have to feel for Devlin, he does have a right to knho hho his father is, even if his father doesn\'t want him to!!! I like how Hermione gave him some comfort in the fact that he will know sooner than later!!!

Hoping for more soon!!! Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m just so sad, we learn whats going on eventually, right? Great story ideas. Thanks.
person Rio
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love fanfics when the HP charactors are all grown up and have kids. Plz wrmoremore.
person Starwind
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Time? Time for what? Time to tell Devlin who his father is? I have to know! Oh this fic is shaping up to be a very interesting one. Keep the updates comin\'!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2....... I guess we can tell where Hermione gets her attitude from, go Mom!!!

I thought for sure that Hermione was going to rip Draco\'s face off, her reaction caught me by surprise!!!

I can\'t wait for chapter 3 to see the meeting with Albus & to see how Severus responds to Hermione & his son!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like your fic. I can\'t wait til Hermione and Severus meet!
Hey, you might want to post your fic on lordandladysnape.net. It\'s appropriate.
Keep writing please.
person madisonfairie
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, but please tell me this is not another snape/hermoine story. It is so over done. Tell me its Lucius, please. Or even Dumbledore that would be funny. Sorry there just so many snape/granger stories. As if there aren\'t any other characters to choose from. But I am really enjoying this story.