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Just finished chapters 4 & 5........ HOLY CRAP!!! I must say that I am a bit pissed at Albus, the man always thinks he\'s doing the right thing, but in the end has he really?!? You really had me going there for a bit, I was believing that Lucius was Dev\'s father.... so very glad that he\'s not!!! I think Hermione really caught Sev by surprise!!! How will he feel now that he knows he has missed out on his son\'s life??? I am really looking forward to finding out more about Sev & Hermione\'s past relationship & seeing how he deals with the fact that he is a father!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<

I\'m shaking...what an intriguing story. Thanks.

I am very confused about the whole potionng mng meaning that Severus is indeed the father of Devlin, but I know without a doubt you\'ll clear up my confusion with your superb writing skills!!! It could just be that I am very tired...in any case, I eagerly look forward to the next chapter (I\'ll check every few minutes).

Hurry please?

::checks again::

Damn.

Hugs,

Gwen

Thank you so much for updating. I love this story. Am anxious to read how Severus became Devlin\'s father.

Oh man!! I so did not see that coming at the end! This fic is getting better and better by the chapter. You HAVE to update soon. Pleeeease!

Great story so far.. I am really enjoying it.. and BTW vile should be vial. Damn homophones anyway.. smile....

\'after morning\' potion? is that what that is? very nice. lol. i am a bit lost though, probably nothing a reread won\'t cure, but let me get the question out of the way. why does severus think he\'s not the father? dev looks like severus, talks, acts like him. isn\'t the saying, \'if it looks like a duck, quacks like a duck, walks like a duck, isn\'t it a duck?\' i\'m guessing from her recent memories that lucius did indeed rape her, so does that mean severus didn\'t? see i\'m all confused. don\'t mind me i\'m just really really slow. it is a good story and hopefully the next chapter will be up soon. hint hint hint.

Great start to what seems is going to be a wonderful story. I\'m excited about this story and have recommended it to many of my fellow WIKTTeers so don\'t let us down! I\'m REALLY looking forward to you updates! Good Luck!

wow. this is an excellently well written story. the details are mesmerizing and the characterization is deep. the plot is believable if a bit subtle right now. i have no idea where the story will go. and it seems you\'ve thrown in a bit of mystery. is snape really the father of devlin or is it lucius? who knows, it might even be someone else. poor dumbledore though. it\'s hard to imagine him ever dying but he is extremely old and the time does come when time catches up with you. i eagerly anticipate more.

Thanks for the update.