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for When It Rains

by NiniGrl

person Kiristeen
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh!! What an evil cliff I just fell off of. LOL

I\'m loving the development of this story. I have to admit to being greedy, however, hope you don\'t mind. More! : )~

::clears throat self-consciously:: Now that, that is out of the way. lol Can\'t wait until your next update.

Kiri

person Imp
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How di dhe know that? Was it because of Severus\' middle name? That makes the most sense. I can\'t remembeat Sat Sev\'s middle name is. Oh well. He\'s a smart biy. Waitin for the next chapter eagerly.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7........ So Severus did love her...... I do hope that they will find that love again!!!

Where is Ron, off searching for Draco perhaps?

Yet another lie, Lucius is still alive:(

I look forward to seeing how the conversation between Devlin & Severus goes, it should prove to be interesting!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
person spaz141
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m usually pretty clueless, so I actually impressed myself by not being confused by the parentage of Devlin. Littlosseossed out by Ron and Draco (but that\'s my problem, not critizing). Interesting plot, thanks for the update.
person Imp
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More please.
person rubberduck
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i can see clearly now... that was very informative that chapter. see, i\'m just slow. lol. need help with the uptake. but that snape, did he use veritaseum (sp?) on hermione? tsk tsk tsk. always a slytherin eh. what a shocker at the end. who knew that ron and draco\'s animosity was all derived from sexual tension? lol. good twist, althought slightly disturbing too. anyway, i look forward to your next update.
person Snapeaholic
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please update soon! This is a bloody good story, and I can\'t wait to see how it turns out! Love it, love it, love it!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6........ This just keeps getting better & better!!! I really can\'t wait tad tad the continuation of the conversation between Severus & Hermione now that she told him that she loved him!!! I am curious to see what he will say after that!!!

The situation between Draco & Ron sounds like it could prove to be quite interesting!!! I really didn\'t see it coming!!! What will happen next, will Ron make the next move, will Draco? Can\'t wait to find out!!!

I am hoping that Devlin will be allowed to know who his father is soon, he deserves that much & more!!!

Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
person Starwind
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is one of my fav HP fanfics ever! I really can\'t wait to see what happens next!
person Kiristeen
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I\'m *really* confused now. I hope how Snape could possibly be Devlin\'s father is explained reasonably soon. From what you\'ve written so far, Lucius was the only . . . um . . .candidate.

Other than that, I\'ve been enjoying this story quite a bit. : ) I look forward to seeing more.


Kiri