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for When It Rains

by NiniGrl

person lildove
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dammit, why does it have to end there????? More chapters soon, please?
person lildove
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 5, this story friggin\' kicks ass!!! It\'s my in-between tons of stupid classwork reading. I can\'t wait to finish it!
person lildove
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The Hermione she remembered had been timid and shy yet fiercely loyal and brave. The know-it-all tendencies had been a clever camouflage of an insecurity few knew existed.

You\'ve got the essence of Hermione right here. Very true to character. I love it!
person Rebecca
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your evil! Leaving off on a cliffhanger like that...oh well, i\'ll just have to wait. Exellenory.ory. The Ron/Draco pairing kinda threw me but there\'s no way i\'m gonna stop reading this, it\'s great. Very original.
person Elanor The Fair
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAHHHH....cliffhangers are not my friend!! This is a great story and I can\'t wait to read more and more and more and more!!!!! I was trying to think of some things that I found need improving, but hell, it\'s your story and you are doing a great job ...far better than I could! Keep it up!!
person WriterLady1031
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I totally like this story. It\'s absolutely fabulous and very interesting. I feel like Hermoine trying to answer all of the questions of her past and maybe solve some of the ones that pertain to her future. Great story!

Ciao ^_^
person Friendlyquark
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me gu Mor Mordecai is Dev\'s middle name too? He\'s a clever boy, but with those tow as his parents he would have to be, wouldn\'t he. Keep goingam ram really enjoying this story.
person sweetdreams
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooo! what a cliff hanger! please update soon... no sleeping, no eating, just type!
person spaz141
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, smart kid. Thanks.
person Lizzie
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! How the hell did i manage to miss this? It\'s BRILLIANT!!!! Ron and Draco (how on earth did you think of that one??!) is such a good pairing! Love it, love it, love it! Write more!