rate_review Reviews

It's a pity you never finished this; it had real possibilities. Good character aging as well! ah, well.

Update, please?

Six months.... update please?? Pretty please?

Ch 5 - YAY, A NEW CHAPTER!!!!!! I can\'t believe I almost missed this. It\'s great! I hope Severus and Devlin have a wonderful relationship, better than with Ron or Harry or Draco. The prophecy - even without Voldemort, there\'s always a dark lord somewhere, so Devlin needs to be trained in defense, and that\'s where Severus could come in handy. Where\'s the next chapter????? Thank you for updating!

this story is awesome can\'t wait to read more.

now there is an interesting plot line.

i find myself intrigued and now looking
forward to more. i do hope there will be
another chapter soon. i\'m rather the
impatient sort and.... and.... and....

don\'t make me come over there! ~giggles~

~blessings~
ldf

Hi, I like you\'re story but when are you going to continue?

I am being honest here, I have no critism of your ability to tell a story. You have talent. I, however, preferred the
original version. In my own opinion this has now become just another Severus/Hermione rape fic. I am disappointed,
but it is your story and you need to go where your muse takes you. As for Draco/Ron I found it highly implausible
but it did not bother me one bit. Remember this is your story, in all the writing courses I have ever taken the
mantra is write for yourself, not other people. Sure reviews are important, as one author put it, its like a form
of payment for all your hard work, however, ultimately you need to be pleased with your end product.

I wish you the best of luck with your new ion ion of the story. I welcome the opportunity to read any future stories
you may write. Thanks.

Ir onr one, fully approved of where the Draco/Ron relationship was going. Not because I'm weird, but because there really is something very emotional between the two of them, and if the same emotions can spawn a relationship in a heterosexual couple, it most certainly can in a homosexualeep eep up the good work.
p.s. I really liked the old story, too!

Ch 3 - re Draco and Ron - how about a three-way friendship between Draco, Ron, and Harry? Maybe make them a sort of "new golden trio" with SS, HG, and Devlin becoming their own "golden trio."