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for Careless Whisper

by lildove42

person MaLady Verdi Molto
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! So the Golden Boy wakes. And fluffiness insues. ^^; *Cough* Anywho, I was thinking: Snape. He\ He\'s a hella mean guy - why we all love him - but he knows his Dark Arts. If you\'re not sure what to do, maybe bring him in, you know? He might have some idea what\'s going on. Not so say wise, old Dumbly-dorr *likes to call him that* doesn\'t, but Snape knows more about the Dark Arts... ...You did this part that I\'m about to mention very well, but I hate how the Boy-Who-Wouldn\'t-F*cking-Die won\'t stop trying to f*cking die. -.-;; Always the hero, isn\'t he? *Sigh* Givs me a headache, sometimes, I swear... *Sigh* But, like I said, that was very realistic of him. I wouldn\'t have thought of that. Nice job. ^.~ Can\'t wait until the next one~!

~MaLady Molto
person Anon
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have a better solution to save Draco\'s mother, we just have to cut her finger and she wil be free of Lucius for ever !!!!!!!!!!! No nedd to use magic in this problem ;-)
person SailorEPrincess@yahoo.com
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Gasp* That was sooo~ sweet! I definately want to know wthe the allusions were. I thought I\'d recognize them, but I didn\'t... I was knoda sad... ^^; Heh... But I really want Harry to wake up! They have to kill the Lucius-spectre-thing! >.<; I really don\'t like him... Teehee. I really don\'t like Dumbledore because he keeps things from Harry, but you can\'t help but feel a ray of hope when he says something. The daft old fool... *Sigh* So, *inserts normal speel here* you need to hurry and post the next chapter so that Harry can wake up and he and Harry can live happily ever after, etc., etc. ^^;

~MaLady Molto
person river
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SOOOO KILLING MEEEEE!!!!! :)
This is so great! God I hate waiting!!!
I have this goofy smile plastered to my face and no next cer ter to read!!
Killing me! Killing me I say!!!!

:)
-river
person chantalmalfoy
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! YAY! YAY! Please let Harry wake up now. Draco\'s done enough groveling!
And someone please get rid of Lucius\' evil presence! Update again soon. I want
to see Harry awake!
person Quiproquo
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo-hoo!! What a great story! Keep going!
Lucuis, that bastard! I hope Harry will awake, please!! Don\'t be too evil whith those two boys...
person MaLady Verdi Molto
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I suppose it wasn\'t Pansy, was it? It was Lucius-controlled!Narcissa. Hmm, that\'s a new one. Never heard of that happpening between Lucius and Narcissa before. Oh, I do hope she dies, though. If only to kill Lucius and not Narcissa, herself, though. Narcissa doesn\'t seem mean in this one. Poor Narcissa.... BNut poor Harry, more! The bloody git can\'t just die on us! I know, I know! It works in anime all the time! Why doesn\'t Draco just kiss him? You know, the Sleeping Beauty syndrom, thing. ^^; I\'m a hopeless romantic, wanting a happy ending, il. l. *Sigh* But it will be a happy ending, right? *poke, poke* I can still kidnap you, if I must, remember. ^.~

~Malady Molto
person Samantha
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can\'t kill anyone, thats evil! Great idea with the whole wedding ring thing, purely original...I think...lol! Draco\'s so...sweet! Too sweet, in my opinion, but I still love what you\'ve written so far. Please update as soon as you can! Thanks!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can\'t leave it there! Oh, please don\'t kill Harry!
I can\'t believe that this fic took such a deadly turn. Wow. Please update soon. I want
to know what happens!
person Quiproquo
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I know what you want... You want me to kill myself ! !
A cliffhanger ? Again ? You