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for Careless Whisper

by lildove42

person Quiproquo
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As usual, great chapter ! !
Congratulations, the plot is so right and your writing is quite interesting !
Keep going and don
person Quiproquo
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok. What am I going to say ?
1.Your story rocks !
2.You
person Desertrain
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was very happy to see an update. I liked this chapter! Now I just have to wonder: Now that Draco has the ring, is he going to start cahnneling Lucius? Hmmmm. . .I hope I see chapter 11 a lot sooner than we saw 10, this is really interesting!

Thanks much,
Deertrain
person jj the jet plane
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! I\'m crying do you see the tears? I\'m crying this is so sad!!! Draco! Harry! And damned lucius and damned Oliver ::strangles Lucius and Olier::
person Desertrain
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so eagerly awaiting an update! I know, I know, I\'ve reviewed this chapter before, but I felt obliged to once again simply to urge you to post yet another chapter. . .please? If I beg really, really hard? ::grins hopefully::

Okay. I\'ll go away before I become a major annoyance. . .small annoyance good. . .big annoyance, not so good.

~Desertrain
person Quiproquo
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow!! this is soooo good!
God you\'re a genius. Keep going, your fic is the best!
One last thing, do you love make me cry that much? A cliffangher? AGAIN?
person C
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You stop your chapters at the most evil of places.

My heart actually dropped at the end of the 9th chapter. I think it\'s amazing that through all of what\'s happened, Harry\'s forgotten what fear is and for him to remr anr and feel fear again when he sees Draco crumpled on the floor is quite the sentiment. It shows that he truly loves Draco and his biggest fear of all is losing Draco and he possibly hasn\'t known that until just then? Sorry, I\'m rambling and will shut up now.

Your story is intriguing to say the least though. I think I\'ve fallen in love with it.
Please continue. I can\'t wait to read more of what\'s to come.

Always,
C
person alex
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH, this is so good! i love this story, please pl ple please update it soon! i can\'t wait to see what happens
person Desertrain
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, great chapter! I was so happy to see that you had updated. I especially liked the last line, it showed a lot of harrys personality, I think. The fact that it never occurred to him to be frightened until her saw Draco unconscious. That was very moving, indeed. I eagerly await another chapter!

~Desertrain
person Quiproquo
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wooow... Please, keep going!! I can\'t believe it I have to wait... again!
You are too good at this: the story is even better than before.
Update, please. SOON!