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for Dawn Breaking

by Barrie

person deblovesdragon
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Barrie, thanks for the chapter. I don\'t know why I enjoy these 2 characters so much. It could just be your brilliant writing. Tonks is very likable though.
The name you came up for Quirrell is wonderful. Wonderfully pompus.
When you have time, don\'t forget your little fic that could. :-)
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is a sweet story! I am perpetually drawn to the characters on the edge- or even in complete shadow- and I love seeing them made human, fleshed out, given feelings and stories of their own. I\'ve always liked Quirrell, felt sorry for him and how his story ends, and you\'ve fixed it! And made him sexy to boot... although if they were going for creepy when they cast the film they didn\'t quite hit the mark. Whoo hoo! I look forward to seeing this one finished, even if it takes a bit. I\'m patient. Oh- and thanks for helping Tonks realistically deal with her problems! --Q
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I forgot to add one thing... I am in complete agreement with Ian on one particular point (of several). Now how did you phrase it again? --ah, yes. \"The opportunity to lay Snape on his back once a month.\" That, dear author, is something I would be willing to work very, VERY hard for. With entirely different motives. ;-)

Am adding you to my recs!
Q
person Amanda
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You rock! I love Professor Quirrell and no one ever writes about him. Not only have you done that, your story is entertaining. I just want to know if his is gis going to be popping up again any time soon!
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn his mother!!! Did she have to show up THEN?? I guess it could have been worse. They could have been in bed when she arrived.
I really like Tonks and Ian\'s chemistry. Don\'t care for his mother though.
Write more of this fic soon, okay!
Cheers!
person SolitaryAries
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ianthorpe Quirrel!!!! Brilliant!!! All the subtlety of an anneurism :-D Have I ever mentioned how much i LOVE your writing? EPU and Subrosa are remarkable. But Ianthorpe Quirrel :-D that\'s just ruddy fantastic.
person cherylzv
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I came across your story today and read through the whole thing at once! Love your style - you had me laughing out loud through most of it, and waiting to see what was going to happen next through the whole thing. Very cool, can\'t wait for updates.
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yipee!

Are you finished with your Remus/Tali ficlet?

Write more soon please.
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more please
person kate
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love the visual of Tonks, flying through the air, then wanting to kick some middle-aged mom\'s butt (hey! that\'d be me!) in revenge.

Great light touch with the humor.

Um, I wouldn\'t mind a monthly exhausting by Prof. Snape, just in case it\'s ever an option.... ;)