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by Shiv5468

person Gwennavierre
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story!! I don\'t know if I completely understand the \"Neville point\" thing, but it cojustjust be my own fault. :-D Keep up the good work. I can\'t wait \'til Friday evening! ;-)


Hugs,

Gwen
person MaddyRiddle
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Strip chess? \'s \'s an original idea! And I like the Nevilles...
Good chapter... please, please, keep writing and updating all your fics... please?
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story! i love it! update sooN!
person Leina
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LoL This is so silly! What does Severus know anyway? He probably thinks a trip to the library and Knockturn alley are romantic.
person spaz141
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.
person MaddyRiddle
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Severus is so clueless that is funny...
He is as clueless as the guy I\'m pursuing... maybe I should recommend him this fic... well at least I can relate to Hermione in this fic ;)
Keep writing!
person Patatita
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
...\"they should rather be worrying whether they could touch the tip of their nose with their tongue. He could; but whether this was because he was particularly well-endowed in the nose or tongue department he couldn
person Lizski
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I love your \'voice\' in this. And this line: \"Judging from this book, they should rather be worrying whether they could touch the tip of their nose with t ton tongue. He could; but whether this was because he was particularly well-endowed in the nose or tongue department he couldn
person LaRoseNoire
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Since fanfiction.net is being difficult, I have come here to leave my review of chapter 3! HA! That will show the little buggers! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, though it sounded vaguely familiar (probably all the ranting my husband does about woman and how the convoluted theythey think. Nice to know wizards are not immune to the mystery t hat is Us). The image of Snape dutifully taking notes from a woman\'s magazine is one I shall treasure. I can\'t wait to see how he intends to be even MORE mysterious (rather like him trying to be even MORE snarky, isn\'t it?) and how Hermione reacts. This is really a lovely story!
person LittleBird
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Severus has tapped into the secret documents reserved only for witches!! Now that he knows all their secrets Hermione will never be safe!! Can\'t wait!!