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by Shiv5468

person Estrilda
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update - this is a cute story - but could you please, please update \"not just for Christmas?\" Please? {I\'m begging here}
person Haw+
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought Nevilles were clear enough the first time, but I could be biased. Your explanation was quite funny, however, and I\'m dying to see where this story is going. Actually, I\'m pretty sure where it\'s going to go, but I\'m interested to see how it gets there!
person spaz141
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was fun. Thanks.
person mssudie
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this!
person kate
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fun story and let\'s face it, we\'ve all wanted to be able to figure out the other sex. Whichever sex that is.

I won\'t even say anything about the strip Wizard\'s chess. I love the idea, I just never had the courage of my own convictions to do anything with it -- bless you for having the, er, pawns to do it.
person hephastus
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am laughing so hard and this is SO well written that you had BETTER hurry up and write the next two chapters....clematis....I am gasping for breath. How long have you been writing? This is hysterical!

I can\'t wait to see the next chapter; your style is flowing, loose and funny; you\'ve got an excellent grip on the characters, the plot is amusing, the idea behind the Nevilles is vastly creative and very humourous...I love this. I\'ll read it again.

Looking forward to more,
Hephastus
author, The Black Unicorn
person ancientgirl
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is starting out great. I can just see Professor Snape reading women\'s magazines to get into a woman\'s head. Please update soon.
person GiaWolff
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. ROFLMAO! It is funny, because it is so much like, yet dislike the characters. ^^ I love the flirty Hermy, odd Minerva, and beffudled Sevvy. *huggles Snape plushie* XD *eye pops out* oops...
person missM
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE that he\'s following \'The Rules\'!! Hysterical in itself.
The fact that Minerva has such a kinky mind is brilliant. Continue...
M
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4........ Well, she got her opening & he took the bait;-) I still think strip chess would have been interesting!!! Who knows, she could start playing, pretend to get hot &......... could prove to be quite a Friday night for them!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<