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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::claps hands:: I was hoping you would do something with this. I love it! I can\'t wait to see what Severus does with this information..poor clueless man that he is. Brava Shiv!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2... WONDERFUL!!! I love how Severus was reading the book, being quite the critic, yet comparing himself to parts of it, Gotta Love That Man!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!!b >^b >^..^<
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
First ever review is just up there, but I\'m back already.
\"He glared at people a lot; did that count as boring into someone
\"He glared at people a lot; did that count as boring into someone
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading your fantastic stories for ages but never reviewed, which probably makes me a very selfish cow who just takes, takes, takes.... So, a new story is the perfect opportunity for me to redeem myself by showering you with praise.
I absolutely love the dialogue in your writing. There are so few fanfic writers who manage that aspect of the story even competently, never mind well. I know this because I\'m one of the incompetent ones who\'s never posted anything as a result. Lovihe che climbing planne, ne, and the improperly dressed one, and.... oh, just all of them.
I very much like your Hermione as well, she\'s the one who I see in my mind\'s eye. Easily intimidated and manipulated Hermione doesn\'t appeal to me one little bit.
I\'m very much looking forward to discovering exactly how this story is going to lead to the same place as all the others. Will there be any writhing? ;)
I absolutely love the dialogue in your writing. There are so few fanfic writers who manage that aspect of the story even competently, never mind well. I know this because I\'m one of the incompetent ones who\'s never posted anything as a result. Lovihe che climbing planne, ne, and the improperly dressed one, and.... oh, just all of them.
I very much like your Hermione as well, she\'s the one who I see in my mind\'s eye. Easily intimidated and manipulated Hermione doesn\'t appeal to me one little bit.
I\'m very much looking forward to discovering exactly how this story is going to lead to the same place as all the others. Will there be any writhing? ;)
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The start of what looks to be another FABULOUS story you.....that first chapter was awesome....please update soon and often.
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good-o! You always come up with the best dialogue, Shiv! \"Clematis,\" indeed! It takes something special to keep up a character\'s character in dialogue, and have a discussion sound natural while it moves the story along. More! More! (please!)
Blessings,
Dame Niamh
Blessings,
Dame Niamh
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more!! I really love this plot, keep up the story please. :]
xoxo,
ellie
xoxo,
ellie
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A great first chapter... I\'m still laughing at Minerva\'s comments. Please keep writing!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Cheers (both US and UK denotations) for playing with tropes and making them funny, not flat and boring.