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for Safe House

by moonstonemystyk

person RubyRaven
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i dont rly no wot to say nemor, im sure u haf herd it all b4
its great carry on blabla so i wil jus tel u, once again,
that i hav read it and still love it

luvz Ravn.x.
person raija
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'d better update soon. I love this.
person angel
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story and a fairly underused pairing and plotline. I\'m really enjoying this. Your little teasers \'coming next week.........\' are a great idea, it makes me look forward to the next chapter more.

On the pregnancy front m-preg can be and has been done well, but for some reason in this story I can just see the two adopting all the war ons tns they can. Molly loves Harry, she\'ll love any child he has, blood grandchild or not. Of course your muse will tell you exactly how to write it and it will turn out great anyway.

keep up the good work

angel
person Lady S
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH boy, more, more, more.....
person swimchick101
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I\'ve never seen this pairing before. Good job, keep going!
person Eric2
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was a good chpter but it semed to just stop post again soon
person riss
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha very nice writing.. youve created a really original story
person swimchick101
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can\'t wait until the rest of this! It\'s so good. I think Harry should be the one to get pregnant, if either. It\'d just be weird having Charlie pregnant. But do what your muse tells you.
person RubyRaven
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is gettin goo good.
carry on!
luvz Ravn.x.
person ChiChi
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a very cute story. I like the pairing, it is very sweet and I\'ve never seen it before.
Keep up the good work and keep writing ^_^