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for Safe House

by moonstonemystyk

person amak206
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. I can\'t wait to see what\'s next. Charlie and Harry, who would have guessed.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well... At least the baby will belong to y any and Charlie. But I still wanted to see a pregnant Harry...
maybe Snape will have that potion ready for a second child.
person Pam
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have loved this story since I found it. To be honest though there are a few things that trouble me in reading the last few chapters. One is the constant bagering you wrote of Ginny and Hermione of Harry and Charlie. Almost like they have control and sayso on the H/C private life and decisions. Which brings me to Ginny\'s offer. I mean that to be is just not right. It won\'t be H/C\'s kid, it will be H/G\'s kid, even though she is a weasley. And you even wrote that she still loved Harry in a way she shouldn\'t. So there is just something underhanded in her wanting to be a part of his life like thiEspeEspecailly if you have introduced the idea of a potion so a male can give birth. They don\'t need her. It ruins the idea of two, to be the fact that she will be the baby\'s mom. I don\'t know it just kind of ruined the story for me.
person Pam
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have loved this story since I found it. To be honest though there are a few things that trouble me in reading the last few chapters. One is the constant bagering you wrote of Ginny and Hermione of Harry and Charlie. Almost like they have control and sayso on the H/C private life and decisions. Which brings me to Ginny\'s offer. I mean that to be is just not right. It won\'t be H/C\'s kid, it will be H/G\'s kid, even though she is a weasley. And you even wrote that she still loved Harry in a way she shouldn\'t. So there is just something underhanded in her wanting to be a part of his life like this. cailcailly if you have introduced the idea of a potion so a male can give birth. They don\'t need her. It ruins the idea of two, to be the fact that she will be the baby\'s mom. I don\'t know it just kind of ruined the story for me.
person Raija
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ginny did the right thing. I guess. And btw I love this story.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that\'s very nice of Ginny, but i was really hoping for a pregnant Harry...
person Zephyr
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love the idea of Ginny as a surrogate!

More on the Dragons and Wizarding happenings soon?
What is Voldemort up to he has been awefully quiet!

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person Eric2
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was extreamly nice of ginny to offer to carry there child, but i think that they should at least try to get one of them selfs pregnant first, if they cant fall back to ginny.
person Solo\'s Ghost
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please write more soon please i love this story.
person eric2
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i wonder what there plans are?