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cant wait to see how it ends!!!

This is a lovely piece of work so far. I agree with your statement about Harry being a survivor of rape and trauma, not to mention abuse or at least neglect at the hands of the Dursleys (from canon), and I think your characterization is perfect. I have read some other fan fiction involving Snape/Hagrid with Hagrid as the rape survivor and there is the same patience, care, and respect from Snape. Severus may have cultivated the greasy git potions master and death eater personas, but I believe that inside he has capacity for caring, especially through actions and not necessarily with words. I look forward to another chapter.

Best regards,

Fiorilla

So far...I love it. Very emotional and heart-wrenching but it has a plot that just seems to carry you along. I am thoroughly enjoying it and I hope you add soon.

I think it\'s sad Harry was raped but wonderful that despite that he and Severus are now together. The wedding was beautiful and had more love than my cousin\'s.

One question how does a guy get pregnet?

^_^I love bonding fics! Hope this isn't over yet...
update soon!;)

This is a great story and I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen next. Keep up the great work.

cool e-mail me when you update

hi, cali, when are you going to continue your stories.

you need to concentrate on making your characters more real, severus and harry and all the others have personas you just haven\'t been able to capture. the characters that you have made are fine, although slightly stiff, so i suggest you write originals until you are correctly able to write the harry potter characten thn their correct personas