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by Hunnypeach

person Anon
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! [claps hands excitedly], this just keeps get fun funner !
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 is FANTASTIC!!! I like the flashback, gives a better insight into the relationship that they had. I also like how you wrote Ron in that part, what a heart!!!

Why did Draco Obliviate Ginny if he ends up sending her flowers & a note?

Can\'t wait for chapter 4, hoping their meeting is good for both of them.... in more ways than 1;-) Deb >^..^<
person Nearly Headless Ra
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry! I was out all day and only just got back so I couldn\'t review earlier! Well, anyways since I managed to finish ur latest chapter - this is all I have to say: Definitely your BEST work to date! It\'s a very rare read in DM/HG fandom, not too dark, not too romantic, not too comedic - I guess, it\'s a \"romantic comedy\" in a genre. A very good easy nice warm read that leaves you feeling giddy, fuzzy and wanting more. It kinda reminded me of \"Bridget Jones\' Diary\" plus \"The Object of My Affection\" kinda stories. I absolutely *heart* it!!! Wowee! Encore! Encore! Encore! I couldn\'t find any loopholes at all, in fact, I liked it how you revealed more and more with each other - how they had a past with one another, how Ron found out, unfound feelings, and yet there is a intricate plot of angst, ROCK, HOT Draco, and everything waiting to explode! I liked Ginny\'s charcter too - very bubbly, funky and what I imagined she would be like in many ways. We\'ll have to wait and see how Harry\'s and Ron\'s character develop then I\'ll see. I especially like your uses of dreams and flashbacks, and we\'ll be having more of that I suspect. This is really a diversion from all your previous HG/DM works which were all somewhat angsty, sad and dark...I rather think you have a knace at writing light comedy, personally I\'m too dark, can\'t seem to read any light romantic comedy, so this is just my perfect pill :p I think the story is going fine, you are taking the time to develop your story and plot, and inserting a little humor now and then... I guess the only thing is to take the time to explore Draco\'s feelings for her - how could he have remained so fixated on her in the first place, and how it could have lasted that long. And yes, seeing as this is centered around a rock band - and this is the same advice I give Nual for her DM/HG fic \"Rebirth of Lucifer\" - just make sure that music and songs is an integral part of your story every now and then! Your story is going along perfectly...can\'t wait to read more!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just finished the 1st two chapters... I really like it so far!!! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter!!! Deb >^..^<
P.S., Will you be adding to your story Secrets in the eyes of the enemy on Fanfic, I miss it!!!
person artemis
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
damnit lunney why in the hell do you do that i hate it when you do that just get on with the fucking story damnit.

PWWWWWEEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE you are driving me up the wall
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh yes. i can see Draco as a Rock God.
i hope he looks truly yummy in those leather
pants of his.

and i like this last chapter, too. Hermione with
her bottom on the front page. poor girl. let\'s hope
someone makes her feel better.

i look forward to more.

~blessings~
ldf
person psr
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loved it even more!
person GrrArrg
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it, Love it, Love it!!

What a fantastic bit of exposition!
I love the tattoo detail, and the obliviate.
Leaves it wide open, as only we, the readers know who he is!
I hope this is a long story, as I am, in case you didn\'t notice, loving it!!
Update soon please, please!!
Kisses
GrrArrg
person star
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
why did he erase her memory?! update I want to see what happens
person Lessa
schedule December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll shout it out... I love this story. You got some great descriptive imagery going on and the plotline looks like it\'s going to be a kick ass one.

I\'ll be waiting with baited breath until the next chapter comes out. ;-)