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for When Death Comes Knocking

by KittenBabyGirl

person chantalmalfoy
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why does Severus have to be such a git? I like the speaking in each other\'s minds thing.
Harry needs love, but how is he evr going to get that from Severus? They did have a nice
sharing conversation before they bonded. Maybe another \"moment\" like that will get them
together...
person Sky
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like. Like, like. Love? Please do continue.
person Raija
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Why thank you about that BIG sev....i just loved to lick the chocolate off
person becca
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i\'m hooked. please continue.
person Blackrose
schedule December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is getting real good. Please don\'t stop now. I wanna see more.
person amy
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Incredibly well written. very moving. dispite the fact that it made me cry I look forward to reading the rest of it!
person Blackrose
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Angst, danger, love it. Please continue with the story. If u read this and would like a beta, I would be more then happy to do it. Just write to the above address. I look forward to seeing more.
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
a very promising start to a good story.

i will await an update.

should you wish to have it betaed before posting,
please feel free to contact me.

~blessings~
ldf