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by dominatrixpenguin

person Anon
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like evil!dom!hermione. unlike the previous reviewer, i wouldn't have minded if this was a post-war fic and draco was a non-con sex-slave! but yeah, with the warnings... other than that, there are a few spelling and grammar errors that you could easily fix to make this story better. ignore the first two reviewers, they obviously haven't got any constructive criticism.
person Zephyr
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story isn\'t that bad yes squicky for some but differnt. It is very extreme BDSM.. You may want to add a warning to your decription for those who do not enjoy the Dark side of sexual relationships. I am gthatthat in this chapter you showed that everything was Consentual. Keep it up..
person ehh
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what a shitty story
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your sick!