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I appreciate the thanks, and I am really looking foward for an update again soon. I love this story line and I feel sorry for Harry not being able to reveal anything that he\'s been through.

Merrideth

Great story so far. The speech to Snape was impressive! I was applauding Harry for standing up to the git!

come now ya gotta update soon

I love it update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I JUST CAN\'T WAIT FOR YOU TO FINISH THIS STORY!!!!!! I WANT TO KNOW WHERE IT IS GOING!!!! I LOVE WHAT YOU\'VE DONE SO FAR!! CAN\'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!

Merrideth

asskicking fic, very good, if you need a beta email me erick_usa@hotmail.com

This fic is so cute. ^.^ Hehheh. I really like the Harry/Remus/Tonks friendly-type relationship-like thing (don\'t I sound eloquent); they\'re some of my favorite characters. Tonks is such a nut, and I can totally see her as Harry\'s big sister. The slow buildup is good--I like fics that take their time, rather than just throwing the readers into it. It\'s more difficult to write that way, I think, but that makes it better. I also like the fact that you didn\'t give the pairing (if there will be one) straight out (and no very bad pun intended, really). I\'m of thf those people who prefers the mystery of it all. :D Most of your grammatical mistakes have to do with punctuation concerning dialogue, but I\'ve enjoyed the rest of the fic so much that I don\'t notice anymore (yeah, I\'m really nit-picky about grammatical stuff... it makes me sound stuck-up, very likely, but hey, we can\'t help our hang-ups). I\'m not trying to sound snobby or bitchy or anything--just a little comment. Constructive criticism, yah? Just, y\'know, keel pel periods, commas, exclamation and question points within the quotation marks and... yeah. Heh heh heh... ^^; I\'ll be lookin\' forward to more! Keep up ze good work, luv. :D

Tonks, luv, you\'d do that anyway. Now it\'s just official. ^^

Brilliant thing with the conquering of the Black Matriarch! Is he going to burn it? If he does, I suggest Muggle means. A lighter, perhaps? ^^
'm s'm so glad of the night with Moony, and, really, the entire relationship between Harry and Remus and Tonks and Harry. Harry and Remus need all the family they can get, and you couldn\'t ask for a better than those three.

Can\'t wait for more chapters - I pounce on this every time I see it. And, Harry, I assure you, you do -not- look stupid in those trousers. *grynz*

Very interesting story so far. Harry\'s birthday was nice and the talk with Moony was great. Love Tonks teasing him about the leather pants. Gotta wonder about the necklace that Bill and Charley gave him. Any magical properties? He still is obviously very depressed by Sirius\' death. Nice to see Neville there with the gang. That shouting match with Mrs. Black\'s painting was interesting. Wonder what he\'s about to do? Really like this so far but feel it\'s a shame that it will eventually turn into a slash story. Pity, as it\'s going so well and I\'ll never read the end as I abhore m/m slash. I\'ll keep reading until it happens though. Maybe you could write a non-slash version as well?

great start so far! is this going to be a Harry/Remus fic? i just love slash! *giggles* makes me wish i were a sexy male bitch... *sighs contendidly at the thought( erm, yea, anyways... moving on to the second chappie! great job on the first once again!

-Kiwi