rate_review Reviews

This is the bomb. This is getting real good. This story is great great great. Please don\'t make Siri have second thoughts. Siri and Sevi are soooo good together. Keep it up mate.

Ah, where to begin, where to begin? I just finished reading chapters 6 and 7. What a blast!

The so-called thin line between love and hate is so palpable between Black and Snape. The way you write their interactions is brilliant. Realistic without the over-the-top melodrama that is pervasive in most of the Black/Snape fics I have read. Bravo! And Harry and Ron are having so much fun! I\'ve said this before, and I\'ll say it again: these two relationships are at the opposite ends of the spectrum, and how you seamlessly jump from one to the other is superb.

The Tweetybird curse is priceless.

And is that \"The Main Event (Enough is enough)\" that Dumbledore was warbling? Naughty girl!

Can\'t wait for the rest.

idiotic savant

Hi. I\'m enjoying this story a lot. It\'s great how you juxtapose Harry/Ron\'s fun-filled and innocent shagging with Black/Snape\'s complex and many-layered relationship. I like the deft way you write how some of the pairings started, really matter-of-fact instead of going through some long-winded explanation. And I love the throwaway kink! (Padfoot with Snape! Incest with twincest!)

My only suggestion would be for you to concentrate on your main pairings and not deviate too much from them. The fifth cha sex sex was hot, but it did not seem to have any bearing on the whole story. Mind ythisthis is not a complaint (sex is always good), just an observation. I apologize in advance if everything gets all tied in together in future chapters. Good work so far.

idiotic savant

It\'s great to see a Sirius/Snape fic. Hope to see them get together. This story is really good. Please carry on with it. I\'m new to this place myself. I\'ve just posted a story called A Christmas Gift. It\'s a Harry/Snape fanfic. Don\'t worry. This story is great.

hauntingly disturbing ..... but good.
plz write more.
o.o;;;

I really like this fic, but can you stick to Sirius and Snape a bit more? They are the main pairing, right?

Uh ....... huh. Very nice. And we just can\'t wait for chapter 3 .... \'we\'? The voices in my head, of course!
VoicesInHead(Sirius,Snape,Ron,Fred,George,Lupin,Tonks,Hooch) W00t!
Please write more!

Great first chapter! Sirius seems to be able to have chemistry with just about anybody, but with Snape, it\'s even more pronounced because the two dislike each other so much, so for that reason alone, I\'ve found myself really enjoying this pairing. Sirius Black was one of two characters that got me hooked on HP in the first place (the other being a certain older, blonde Slytherin). Since the disaster that was OOtP, I\'ve only been reading AU Sirius fics, so I\'m glad I found this one. :D

I look forward to reading more from you :-). Well done!

Cheers!
Sher