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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Having Hermoine engaged to Draco pulled me right out of the story.
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. GO ON DAMN YOU GO ON! *throws random projectiles*
Lupin: Oh im so angsty waaawaawaa
Sirius: *shags Snape*
Lupin: NOOOOOOO SIRIIIIIIIUSSSSSSSS!
Sirius: *kicks Lupin*
Update. NOW!
Lupin: Oh im so angsty waaawaawaa
Sirius: *shags Snape*
Lupin: NOOOOOOO SIRIIIIIIIUSSSSSSSS!
Sirius: *kicks Lupin*
Update. NOW!
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is real good. Keep it up mate. I wanna see more.
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15:
Nice window into the past. I could feel the momentum building towards the conclusion of your marvellous story. Wonder which way you\'re going to go?
idiotic savant
Nice window into the past. I could feel the momentum building towards the conclusion of your marvellous story. Wonder which way you\'re going to go?
idiotic savant
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Looking forward to more. Hope to see it soon. Hope Sev and Siri sort themselves out. Keep it up.
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13: Nice filler chapter; plenty of action and dialogue from the support cast, which adds plenty of connectivity amongst the other chapters. Love Lupin\'s and Molly\'s involvement. The Twins remind me of those \"Queer Eye for the Straight Guy\" crew-i.e. planning the bachelor party, knowledge of the upcoming wedding details, etc. Hmm, wonder what the have planned for Mr. Black? ;-)
Off to read the next chappie.
idiotic savant
Off to read the next chappie.
idiotic savant
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14:
Molly Weasley-awesome characterization. (Aramis Herbal *laughs*-used to wear a cologne called Aramis; reading the word brought back some, err, prurient memories.)
The bachelor party was good reading-so funny. And then the Twins pull their little stunt-OOOPS!
Bad, bad Lady Sirius- how could you torture Siri and Sevie like that? More, I tell you!
idiotic savant
Molly Weasley-awesome characterization. (Aramis Herbal *laughs*-used to wear a cologne called Aramis; reading the word brought back some, err, prurient memories.)
The bachelor party was good reading-so funny. And then the Twins pull their little stunt-OOOPS!
Bad, bad Lady Sirius- how could you torture Siri and Sevie like that? More, I tell you!
idiotic savant
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello. Just finished reading chapter 11. (I know, I know, I should have read it some time ago. Mea culpa.)
It\'s wonderful how everything worked out in this chapter. Great build up from the previous ones, all leading up to the events in chappie 11.
Wonderful lovemaking scene - sweet, tender, sexy and uber-creative. I did not mind the \'fluffiness\' because, as I stated, there was a progression leading up to it. It\'s not like they jumped into bed and it was all romance right from the start; that approach just would not work with these two.
Hmm, planning on throwing a monkey wrench into the proceedings, are you? Don\'t make promises you won\'t keep. ;)
As always, looking forward to future works.
idiotic savant
It\'s wonderful how everything worked out in this chapter. Great build up from the previous ones, all leading up to the events in chappie 11.
Wonderful lovemaking scene - sweet, tender, sexy and uber-creative. I did not mind the \'fluffiness\' because, as I stated, there was a progression leading up to it. It\'s not like they jumped into bed and it was all romance right from the start; that approach just would not work with these two.
Hmm, planning on throwing a monkey wrench into the proceedings, are you? Don\'t make promises you won\'t keep. ;)
As always, looking forward to future works.
idiotic savant
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. Apologies for the late review. (Now, that I think about it, I should have read your latest chapters sooner!)
Cross-dressing, bondage, blackmail photos, Amaretto and food IN addition to the standard vanilla action ALL in one sex scene? Aack, be still my beating heart! Bring it on, baby! And judging from the size of a certain appendage, methinks that Sirius\'s Animagus form should have been a horse. :-)
Enjoyed the bit about how Remus figured into the equation, by the way. It added depth and history into Sirius/Severus dynamic.
I loved the interaction among everyone in Scotland; it fleshed out a lot of the supporting characters.
Your sex scenes are superb. Bve mve me, I know what I\'m talking about. ;-)
Can\'t wait for more.
idiotic savant
Cross-dressing, bondage, blackmail photos, Amaretto and food IN addition to the standard vanilla action ALL in one sex scene? Aack, be still my beating heart! Bring it on, baby! And judging from the size of a certain appendage, methinks that Sirius\'s Animagus form should have been a horse. :-)
Enjoyed the bit about how Remus figured into the equation, by the way. It added depth and history into Sirius/Severus dynamic.
I loved the interaction among everyone in Scotland; it fleshed out a lot of the supporting characters.
Your sex scenes are superb. Bve mve me, I know what I\'m talking about. ;-)
Can\'t wait for more.
idiotic savant
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This. Is. Great. Plz let there be a nice happy future for Siri and Sev. Please?