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for A Tale of Two Men

by DarkLoveZorg

schedule May 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding lovely beautiful!
person HarryVik
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just want to ask, in the first chapter i get the idea that severus still is the Potion master of hogwarts thought then you write "Sirius stepped closer to the Dark Arts professor, his manner threatening." Which is it?
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i liked the sex scenes! (after all this is ADULTfanfiction ...)
person Amber
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I finally got around to reading some of your fanfics. No surprise I started here, huh? lol
Anywho, I love it so far, and am going to keep reading, when I have some time. Heh.
person Amber
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. That was hot. I'm running late for class now (as usual). Damn you are good. We've got to get our AU RPG up and running. *evil grin*
person Tesgura
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re wondering how you sex scenes are, well they\'re fucking amazing. There you go, aren\'t you happy *slight mockery* ?
person Hetti
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I really enjoyed your story!
Especially the way you write about Sirius! I haven\'t been his big fan until I read your fanfic.
person idiotic savant
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blushing profusely*
Oh my. A chapter dedicated to moi? Flattery will get you everywhere! Thank you.

What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story; equal parts bitter, because the story itself is over, and equal parts sweet, because of the loveliness of how it all resolves in the end.

I loved Hermione and Draco\'s nuptials in chapter 16. But Snape and Black\'s commitment ceremony in the final chapter brought a lump to my throat; it was so beautiful and realistic. It had an extra resonance for me and I\'ll tell you why. Anyone who feeps abreast of current events is aware of what is going on in San Francisco right now. I have quite a few friends who went there to get married. My friends were so happy when they came back; the way you wrote the final chapter captured the essence of their happiness and their hope. And for that, you have my eternal gratitude.

Three cheers for your first foray into fanfic writing!!!

idiotic savant
person MeishiesFantasy
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice ending. whatever. :rolls eyes: woot. snairiuirius. yeah.
person Blackrose
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Hope to see the sequel out real soon. Hope to see ur other stories as well.