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by gryphnwng

schedule August 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great ending made me smile 

person Anon
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't say I appreciated your breaking the fourth wall, lol, but it was a very good story, I loved it. By the way you have a few typos, like 'lags' rather than legs' - not that it detracts from how enjoyable it is to read, but just to let you know.
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I fucking love it!!!!! And I love how you added the wonderful Miroku.
person Chibes
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cute I was chuckling the whole time...
person Mortifyd
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NICE ENDING!! LOL
person idiotmuse
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was an excellent pwp. I especially liked the treatment with Albus, befuddled and not as omniscient as we all think he is.
person Rache
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evil!!! how could you only make one chappie?! i like the joke with fawkes and dumbledore though. very funny.
person Sarryn
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, highly amusing and so hot! Nice IY reference ;)