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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I think that was really well done. A sequel would be sort of nice - particularly Draco\'s reaction to Hermione, and whether Draco apprentices with Snape, etc. etc. Anyway, this was great!
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a lovely story.
Sure, a sequel would be good to fill in the empty space between the engagement and the 2 children (w/ 2 more on the way)
If you decide to write more, I will look forward to it.
Sure, a sequel would be good to fill in the empty space between the engagement and the 2 children (w/ 2 more on the way)
If you decide to write more, I will look forward to it.
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. It had the right amount of humor to offset the romance, which can be sometimes overdone. Not in this story but in others. I\'d like to see a sequel, when their kids get to Hogwarts and what happened to Harry and Ron. How did their lives turn out.
Great work.
Thanks for a great sto
Tex
Great work.
Thanks for a great sto
Tex
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It took me the better part of the day, but I just finished your story & I LOVE IT!!! I vote for a sequel!!! Deb >^..^<
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, wonderful story... so detailed, loved how you showed us why they acted the way they did, letting us in on their feelings and insecurities, laughed, cried, enjoyed the loving! ;) Would love to read a sequel, or any other stories you might write, esp about SS/HG!
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whatever begging you want, please let me know. I shall be happy to do it. It was lovely to be able to read a story in one sitting. I see nothing OOC about any of the characters. In fact, I rarely am bothered by OOC, except when they sound like adolescent conversation overh in in a mall. I will tell you that this story will be added to my favorites so it does not get lost in pages of AFF. I will look forwar see seeing your name on stories. Excellent job. Well done.
Mary Kay
Mary Kay
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I like your story a lot, but, french being my mothertongue, I can\'t help to correct your expression...
\"Je nous vois seul ne dine pas.\" is very bad french(dobby like if you see what I mean...)
\"I see we are not dining alone\" would be \"je vois que nous ne dinons pas seul\" but you 't s't say that in french, in a good restaurant, people would say \"je vois que Monsieur est accompagn
I like your story a lot, but, french being my mothertongue, I can\'t help to correct your expression...
\"Je nous vois seul ne dine pas.\" is very bad french(dobby like if you see what I mean...)
\"I see we are not dining alone\" would be \"je vois que nous ne dinons pas seul\" but you 't s't say that in french, in a good restaurant, people would say \"je vois que Monsieur est accompagn
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Incredible fic! I loved reading this! I hope that you will be feeling better soon!
Hugs,
Ness
Hugs,
Ness
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. I seriously laughed until tears came to eyes when I read this: \"Severus tried not to flinch at her father\'s pet name for her. There was nothing affectionate about being named after the fecal matter of a magical four-inch terror with wings.\" And I got teary for other reasons when you fic tugged at the heartstrings. For not being betaed, there\'s only a small amount of cleanup that your fic needs!
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!!! I have never read anything of yours, so I was in for a ple pleasant suprise!! Thanks for a wonderful read!!!!!