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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was one the best and most erotic fanfics I\'ve ever r I f I fell in love with Snape reading this one. You\'re an incredible writer. I want to rape someone now!
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love the story. It\'s great!
(Well I would love to say more but your story left me speechless, sorry)
(Well I would love to say more but your story left me speechless, sorry)
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story very much. I thought the characterisation of Hermione and why she would suddenly take an interest in Severus was well-drawn; similarly with the characterisation of a vulnerable Severus. You managed to pack a lot of incident into a short space of time and, although it stretched credibility a little, you felt so much goodwill towards the couple that you allowed yourself to be swept along by the story.
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::raises hand in air:: I\'ll beg for a sequel. : )~ Loved the story. A classic romance. Well done.
Kiri
Kiri
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
dear goodness. i\'m partway through part two, but i had to stop and review. drunk minrva cracked me up, and your sev/mione pairing is the sweetest one i\'ve ever read. honestly, i could have cried. so write on, ye of the golden quill, and put Rowling to shame! ~ a very satisfied Leah
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, oh, yay, greatness!!! that was the best. thank you for keeping our darling precious Severus and Hermione in character. wow again, twenty points to your house of choice. :) and you MUST write a sequel. we don\'t want the poor little bunnies to starve, now do we? no, because that wouldcruecruel, and i would have to hunt you down and force a pen into your hand.
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
:) What a lovely story. I\'d love to see a sequel, but where you\'ve left it is great too. It was a wonderful story. If you do write a sequel, you could have a great fight scene between Ron & Severus where they come to an understanding and perhaps get trashed together. You also didn\'t mention it, but it almost seemed as if Ron and Harry were a couple? Maybe they are just still really close and all thier children play together.
Great story!!!
Jen :)
Great story!!!
Jen :)
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Great story. Good job.
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Not bad at all, for a first draft! A sequel might be nice, if you\'re up to writing one...
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, would love to see more! Keep up the good work!!