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for Who Do You Want?

by ElizabethStump

person mysticsong
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this a lot. :)
person Adorina Mae
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write a Sequel!!!! Please there aren\'t enough sappy/smutty stories
It was so cute but so improbable
person Sheila
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see a continuation of this story. Please keep up the great work and send a new sequel soon.
person Narcissa Black
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best fics I\'ve ever read, and I\'ve read more than I care to admit. You made the romance between Hermione and Severus more than believable. Now I have to go and see if any of the sequels you mentioned at the end have actually been written. I would like to see Draco, Ginny and Ron get theirs. If they haven\'t been, can I plead for them now?
person Killisandra
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you can\'t leave the story off there. I just read the whole thing and you have got to finish the damn thing. Like a confrontation between Ron and Hermione. Or an argument between Hermione and Snape? Add a little more depth to it. Come on, I thought this was going to be so much better. Please update or open the story again but don\'t forget to put a disclaimer in there because the new mediators for AFF are getting rid of any stories with out disclaimers. I hope you heed my advice.
Blessed Be,
~Sandra~
person jose
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

That was very good. It\'s not my Snape you\'ve written about. Mine would not ever show himself to be vulnarable but you convinced me using yours for a while. He is very very well thought out. You almost made me weep. And, to be honest, you can really write about sex!!!! You got me excited, I am not into leather that much but your slow sex was exquisite. Very very good, thank you for writing that
person Moi
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pixie doodle! I laughed myself to tears!
person Anijade
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story but why did you change the ending. I liked knowing what happened to them
person Lexie
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Definately add a sequel. I think you should start maybe a few days or weeks after the proposal.
I love both of your stories so far! Keep it up!
person Lysa
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautyful. Thanks.
Sequel, please.