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for Private Life of Severus Snape

by SnapesPlaymate

person valmont
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it
person Sarah
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed the story so far, except the last chapter sort of gives me the creeps... be careful writing stuff with spanking kids, even if they are just totally fictional characters. (Especially when the people doing the spanking aren\'t even the parents.) lol, I can\'t believe I\'m getting all moral with a fanfic at aff. Sorry about that. Oh well. Despite that part, though, I really do enjoy the story... makes me smile! I wish ana had a little more depth and was a little less ditzy and mary sue-ish, but the idea of the story is very fun. Keep up the good work. :)
person clecky
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, but are you ever going to update? Snape's reaction is so tantalizingly out of reach....as are the spankings, LOL
person echelon_sck2
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic...it's really funny and the sentimental parts are cute without being outright maudlin. OH COME ON! You ppl can't just leave me hanging like this...I wanna see Sev's reaction! *snicker*.
person meganHaleyjonessy
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Screw what people say--except me! I like a Mary Sue once in a while, especially if it\'s behind a decent ploy and characterization. This is pretty cool and Snape has never been more \"interesting\" to read about. Update soon on not only this but all youorieories, okay? One shots=bad, continuation=good. =D
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This sucks. Blatant Mary-Sueism and OOC
person Piccolo
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say this...I hate Mary Sue. HATE HER, but LOVE Snapes, so I\'ll let it pass. Anything with Snape is still hot as hell. The story is pretty good (few spelling errors) so keep it up.
person Piccolo
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me just say this too, I\'m not flaming ya. I do like it.
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. Sue.
person Corolla
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Spanking fanfics seem very popular on this site. Ied ted the story, espceailly since it involves my favorite character Snape. Continue writing. And on the controversy you had, I say kee your head up. Once flamed story it\'s the end of the world.