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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Living in England? What\'s wrong with Ireland, Scotland and Wales?
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is great! Please keep writing!
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really very good. You set the scene nicely. I can\'t wait to read more.
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK, I just read the other reviews and am now shooting a wad of chewing gum up the evil peeves nose with the waddiwasi charm! I wanna know what happens tooooo! (foot stamp and pout added for dramatic effect) Update soon!
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The word conspiracy comes to mind...so does payback. I hope they are gentle. This is great!
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I smell trouble with a capital M. You need to keep the humor in this story as you progress.
Dumbldore is good.
Snape needs a bit more snark.
M needs to be more sublte and knowing.
Need more imagery.
US slang doesn\'t work with the characters.
Dumbldore is good.
Snape needs a bit more snark.
M needs to be more sublte and knowing.
Need more imagery.
US slang doesn\'t work with the characters.
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Can\'t wait for the next part.
I loved that \"scene\": Without saying a word (frankly, his teeth were clenched so tightly as to render speech nearly impossible), the man who
Can\'t wait for the next part.
I loved that \"scene\": Without saying a word (frankly, his teeth were clenched so tightly as to render speech nearly impossible), the man who
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter2... I just love it when Albus gets involved!!! This should prove to be quite interesting indeed;-) Who was the figure in the bar? Til next update, Deb >^..^<
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was bloody brilliant! I just adore Snape and to imagine him as a whipped puppy has me in fits of hysterical laughter!!!
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting so far. Looking forward to updates!