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despite a title that could use some help, this is turning out to be rather entertaining. Do update soon.

Well written and highly entertaining - made me laugh out loud! Thanks for posting this!!

Okay, they clicked in a cerebral way, but how about physically? Is that what is next?
Thanks for the updates. Keep writing. Cheers!

Ooo! I was a bit scared there for a minute, but it worked out in the end! I am so glad! I wonder what everyone will say when they find out that she slept in his room and that they talked all night long into the morning! I hope there will be more dates! What will happen next! Update soon!

This is such a fun story! Can\'t wait to see how it continues to develop - especially can\'t wait to see McGonagall & Co\'s reactions to Hermione having stayed the night - teehee!

This just put a lump in my throat & tears in my eyes.... WELL DONE!!! I LOVE it when two people make such a positive & powerful connection!!!! It was very well written & filled with the passions of both charachters. You wrote it in a way that was very believable to their personalities!!! I LOVE the compassion that Severus showed her in the restaraunt & can only imagine the looks on the faces of his colleagues when he ushered her out. The pure passion of their subjects in their lengthy conversation was evident. I can\'t wait to see where you take these two when she wakes up!!! Wonder what Albus & the ladies will be speculating when she shows up to dinner with Severus;-) Hoping to find out something about the mys fig figure that was at the inn as well? Til next update, Deb >^..^<

I thought that it was ron and harry that had pressured her into answering a personal ad. that doesn\'t work with what you\'ve written in chapter six. hopefully you have some way of working around this problem because otherwise that is a big plot whole.

hmm, i reread that part of the story and though it\'s confusingly worded, you\'re plotline still works

Oh my! These last two chapters sent me from one emotional extreme to another. lol That \'first date\' was a doozy, that\'s for sure. I felt *so* embarassed for him. Poor guy.

And the second one. Wow. HOT. And then the letter. ::sniffles:: Of course, we couldn\'t have it work out, now could we. lol Not if it\'s going to be hermione/snape.

Anyhoo, excellent job and I look forward to the next installment.


Kiri

oooo! Perfection. The scene at the three broomsticks was good, but what was really great was Snape\'s double take at the clock. LOL

Kiri