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December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it definitely was. She sighs as she opens the closest window letting in the cold December air. It\'s getting a bit warm in here, isn\'t it?
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes a woman has got to do what a woman has got to do & HOLY CRAP did Hermione ever do what she needed to!!! That was BEAUTIFUL!!! I really do like how you wrote the end of this chapter.... so overwed bed by it all that those few words said it all!!! Now I really can\'t wait to see what happens when they finally face Albus & the ladies!!! Til next chapter, Deb >^..^<
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet, romantic and lusty at the same time. AHHH!
I feel really bad for Hermione\'s broken relationship with Harry and Ron. That was unexpected.
Severus wasn\'t expecting her, was he?? I hope you have them stay together. (Sigh)
I feel really bad for Hermione\'s broken relationship with Harry and Ron. That was unexpected.
Severus wasn\'t expecting her, was he?? I hope you have them stay together. (Sigh)
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!
Those were some mighty fine lemons, if I do say so myself. Well done! Bravo!
*standing ovation*
Those were some mighty fine lemons, if I do say so myself. Well done! Bravo!
*standing ovation*
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December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh my.... yes, a fan would be good tonight.
i decided to read this, as it is intriguing to see how
people pair the Master with Hermione. i must say
yours is damned original, and i loved it.
some of my most favorite bits were his duscussion
with Dumbledore. from crap, to shit, to fuck. i was
rolling with laughter.
and then on to the first \'meeting.\' that was another laugh
riot. boxed wine, indeed.
i think the funniest bit was Ron and Harry as a happy couple.
i laughed out loud quite a few times. thanks so much for the
laughter. i needed it.
enjoyed this, i did. looking forward to more, i am.
hey.... what the hell is yoda doing here? at any rate, keep
up the good work.
~blessings~
ldf
i decided to read this, as it is intriguing to see how
people pair the Master with Hermione. i must say
yours is damned original, and i loved it.
some of my most favorite bits were his duscussion
with Dumbledore. from crap, to shit, to fuck. i was
rolling with laughter.
and then on to the first \'meeting.\' that was another laugh
riot. boxed wine, indeed.
i think the funniest bit was Ron and Harry as a happy couple.
i laughed out loud quite a few times. thanks so much for the
laughter. i needed it.
enjoyed this, i did. looking forward to more, i am.
hey.... what the hell is yoda doing here? at any rate, keep
up the good work.
~blessings~
ldf
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, let me state first that this is NOT a flame. I don\'t do those. I just started reading the story and have only one comment at the moment. If you decide to change, fine. If not, well it\'s your story. Tom is the bartender at the Leaky Cauldron in London, Madame Rosmerta is at the Three Broomsticks in Hogsmeade.
Well, back to my reading. See ya.
Well, back to my reading. See ya.
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it\'s me again. I just finished Chapter 6. It\'s very good, and I\'m looking forward to seeing where you take it.
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! It figures those two would talk so long. The pizza line was my favorite though. :D
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I really enjoyed reading it. keep writing cant wait to read what happens next
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Katie-baby! That was a wonderful chapter! You go girl! Can\'t wait for the next chappie!
Barrie
Barrie