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for New Beginning

by Darkwriter

person amethystangel
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Darkwriter.... Where\'s the rest? It\'s been four months of patient waiting for such a good story.
person kathy
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my, this is one of the best fics I had ever read. A wonderful piece of art. I really hope you can continue it soon.
All this problem with the weasels have my on end. Although I wonder if all are the same, if all of them survive, etc.
See you in next chapter.
Kisses, kathy
person jenbachand
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE!!!! UPDATE!!!!! SOON!!!!

We haven\'t heard from you in ages & this is such a GREAT story.

Jen :)
person Bambu
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have just read this story tonight, and it\'s quite an adventure. Very intriguing with many ts ats and turns in the plot. All our favorite characters are here, and several with interesting shifts and turns to them. Well done. I hope you\'re simply on a long hiatus, because it\'s really delightful.
person SandraM
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So when are we going to get some more of this. Hell of a place for an extended vacation.
person readersam
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying your story. It is nice for Harry to get a chance to have loving parents and it is especially nice to see Severus Snape become some protective and fatherly. Also have enjoyed your treatment of Ron and Percy. Never disliked Ron, but saw some inklings of how he could easily be a jerk especially in GoF.

Please don\'t drop this story and PLEASE update soon.
person Kathi C
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. When are we going to see more?
person jordy
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just spent almost my entire day glued to the computer screen reading this! My husband is gonna be so upset that I didn\'t get the dishes done! Oh well. He\'ll grumble a while, but he\'ll get over it eventually! ve ive it. I\'m so anxious to find out what happens next, I hope you update soon. My only issue is the grammatical mistakes. (Punctuation errors, duplicated words in sentences, sentences that are missing words altogether, making the sentence not make sense, etc. Please proofread! Sorry, just a stickler for grammer. English major in college and all that. ;-P ) I can\'t wait to find out what happens with that letter to Lucius. I think that I am really looking forward to that the mostven ven though I am rather intrigued by what will happen with Hermoine and the Weasleys. I hope they go easy on her. There\'s also that thing with Draco...

So exciting!!!!

Update soon!!!!

Hurry! I\'m not very patient. Trying hard to be though!
person Tanya
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I noticed that you haven\'t updated in a while, so I wanted to leave you a note letting you know how much I am looking forward to your next update! I love this fic! It is so origional and you have an amazing talent at conveying so many emotions! Please update soon!
Tanya~
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please don\'t give up this story! I am so wound up in it that I can\'t wait for another chapter.