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for New Beginning

by Darkwriter

person Talene
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I knew I wouldn\'t have to wait long....hehe Thanks you so much for that and I am still greedy qand still looking for more! Bless you for being kind enough to accomidate me so willingly! LOL More? Pleeeze?
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapters 4 & 5... this just keeps getting better!!! I hope that Ron NEVER finds her!!! I can only imagine what Severus would do when he finds out that he had been abusive to Hermione?!? Will Sev put 2 & 2 together, the looks, the smell, will he remember the potion & figure it all out? Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Deb >^..^<
person Talene
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still reading and enjoying, Please update soon?
person BeautifullyMalicious
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so good. And you\'ve found a truly original plot! Kudos to you. Please please PLEASE update soon! Email me when you do!
person GeekGoddess
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story started off very dark....and I had prepared myself for an interesting angsty story....chapter 8 was so sweet....this is such a good story and I can\'t wait until you update again.
person Louise
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice prologue. So Harry is the child that stirs feelings of fatherhood in Snape? Looking forward to seeing how Hermione comes to care for Harry. Also curious how ss/hg will occur.

Just a quick beta - change \'temping\' to \'tempting\'.

L.
person Rilla
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a unique plot! This looks interesting.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the 1st time I\'ve read a story like this & I am really liking it so far!!! Ron has just proved himself to be a twit yet again!!! I can\'t wait to see what happens when Hermione & her son go to Hogwarts!!! Will Ron be showing up again or are you going to leave him out of the rest? Til next update, Deb >^..^<
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi....When my hubby and I had ours we decided to give our childree une unusual name and one common one so they could choose at a later time which they would like to go with. I have had 5 children...the boys: Micheal Grayson, James Phelan and Lars Alexander. Grayson means son of the dawn or son of grey (at least according to the book we were looking at), Phela cel celtic for wolf and Lars means crowned with laurels. May I also suggest Peregrine (a type of falcon) and Dimitri. I realise you probably have already chosen the new name but...I just read this story so I am getting to it a little late. Sorry.

Thsi is really a very nice story. I cried the whole while I was reading it. I understand his desire and often wish I could do similar. Please post again soon. I really am enjoying the story despite the tears. Depression is such fun. ;-p Waiting for more.....:)
schedule November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok....just read ch 3(?) and still reading. Didn\'t expect an update so soon but, I\'m not complaining. I *am*, however, greedy enough to ask for more and soon. thanks and Happy Holidays.