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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow - this is without a doubt one of the most original plotlines I\'ve read in a long long while. Also very well-written, and I am proof that the story pulls the reader in (I was PLANNING on only reading the first couple of chapters cuz I have to go to work... and here I still am :) ). Please update soon!!
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This has to one of the most original and interesting stories that I have ever read. I can\'t wait to read what is going to happen next. Keep up the brilliant work and I will be waiting for the next chapter.
Have you posted this story anywhere else? If not is there any way that you could alert me when you post your next chapter.
Have you posted this story anywhere else? If not is there any way that you could alert me when you post your next chapter.
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, I am truly looking forw ard to the next update.
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have an amazing gift for story telling, I hope you finish this.
it will be a shame if you dont.
I hope to see alot more of this Fic soon.
M.
it will be a shame if you dont.
I hope to see alot more of this Fic soon.
M.
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still reading friend. You\'ve slowed down a bit. ;) I am very much looking forward to more from you. This is such a great fic!!
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Just read chaptes 6 & 7... WOW!!! I knew that Severus would figure it out, but I really didn\'t expect him to do something as dramatic as he did!!! I can\'t wait to see what he does when he finds out about Ron hitting Hermione.... hope he & Albus kick his (_!_) !!! Can\'t wait for chapter 8, really loving your story!!! Deb >^..^<
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mind you...I\'m not complaining but I am I going to have to check every few minutes for an update? LOL The depression has passed. You write so very well. I wish i did as well. Waiting for another wonderful update. I\'ll likely check in about 15-30 mins. hehe Thanks!
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this story alot! I mean really I do. I only review thed std stories so feel special or something. This story has a plot, a REAL plot, which most stories here lack. It also is grammatically correct. Maybe not completely, but I didn\'t notice anything that would distract to reader from the story. (Lots of stories here are bad about that too. Ewies to bad grammer and spell checking! I also like how you update so well. That\'s a rare trait(even for me). I\'m glad you do. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more good writing from you.
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I JUST LOVE YOUR STORY!!! WHAT AN ORIGINAL IDEA!!! PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON..
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good premise for this story, love it love it love it , and you update fast too! looking forward to the next chappies!