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for New Beginning

by Darkwriter

schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. Update soon?
person nesscafe
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UH OH! Good question! What is Lucius going to do now that he knows? Update again! PLEASE!!! I can\'t get enough! MORE! MORE! MORE!
person Momma-dar
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I am so happy to see that you have updated again. Is there aay tay that you can possible make the chapters a little longer. It seems like just as it is getting good and I get into it I am at the end. You are doing a great job and I can\'t wait to see what is going to happen next.
person brittni
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! WOMAN UPDAE!!!!!!! *starts to sob uncontrollably* i weep at the lack of updating!
person Kirin
schedule December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooooo! New twist. : )~ Love it.


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person SassMacfru
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evil snicker, Welcome to my world!! Yon\'on\'t beleive how many times I wanted to do that to my hubby!! I take it that not only is mione having trouble with her emotions but PMSing on top of that lol sev beware!! Im really enjoying this story, keep it up!!!
person star
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to tell ya!!! I just love this story but I\'m ready for the two to fall for each other and the spells to be taken off of her. I hope she casterates ron. What a prick! Well, I hope you update very soon :}
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Harry/Darien must know that Lucius will be a very valuable aid in his new life!!! I am really curious to see what Lucius has to say to Severus & Hermione about their son? Til next update, Deb >^..^<
person Flick
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, what\'s Lucius going to do now that he knows Darien=Harry? It opens up a range of possibilities. Update soon plz :)
person nesscafe
schedule December 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sheesh! I can\'t say I blame Hermione for being pissed that he would tell the Mas whs when they were nothing but bad to her in her past, but I will be so glad when she isn\'t such a raging bitch! The fix is coming soon right?! I don\'t know how much more I can take of her and I\'m not even poor Severus!