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January 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Wish it would continue.
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October 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story, love Darian! Read your story in two days and I'm going through withdrawal now. Hope you post more, this is an excellent story!
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. I like your take on Ron. This is the second deaged Harry HGSS fic I've read, after Be Little by coffeeonthepatio. But this was written first. The're quite different, dont worry!
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Severus stared on as the little boy pulled his bottle out of his mouth and grinned up at him. He smirked at the child, “None of that now.” Then gave the little boy a scowl, which only seemed to make him giggle. Severus shook his head. “Hope you know that was my best scowl that scares the first years at Hogwarts.”
Darien didn’t seem to mind this scowl and kept giggling.
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Severus stared on as the little boy pulled his bottle out of his mouth and grinned up at him. He smirked at the child, “None of that now.” Then gave the little boy a scowl, which only seemed to make him giggle. Severus shook his head. “Hope you know that was my best scowl that scares the first years at Hogwarts.”
Darien didn’t seem to mind this scowl and kept giggling.
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
glad sev worked it out already
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
best lines:
“If it’s any consolation, he won’t say Mama.”
Severus laughed, the first time in years. He couldn’t help it.
“If it’s any consolation, he won’t say Mama.”
Severus laughed, the first time in years. He couldn’t help it.
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa - harsh!
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“That is what the spells are designed to do. I won’t lie to you, you’ll have to trust the person totally if you want those broken off of you. It won’t be an easy decision either.”
Severus didn’t want to tell her about what the man would go through just to remove those spells. When it came time to take those away, Hermione would feel as if the man who took them away had raped her. Every emotion that came with that vile act she would experience. It would take a very strong man to know that he helping her and not forcing her to have sex, and whoever did it, God help the man if he was in love with her, because she would probably hate him forever.
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“That is what the spells are designed to do. I won’t lie to you, you’ll have to trust the person totally if you want those broken off of you. It won’t be an easy decision either.”
Severus didn’t want to tell her about what the man would go through just to remove those spells. When it came time to take those away, Hermione would feel as if the man who took them away had raped her. Every emotion that came with that vile act she would experience. It would take a very strong man to know that he helping her and not forcing her to have sex, and whoever did it, God help the man if he was in love with her, because she would probably hate him forever.
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Hexing by Hermione. How could Sev think that her response to being forced to go to chez Malfoofoo would be anthing but murderous?
best lines:Darien had lightened her mood considerably, he had such an innocent awe when it came to playing with toys, just playing period, like it was all new to him. Hermione thought it was sad that Harry had told her he never got to play before, so what Darien was doing now was new to him.
best lines:Darien had lightened her mood considerably, he had such an innocent awe when it came to playing with toys, just playing period, like it was all new to him. Hermione thought it was sad that Harry had told her he never got to play before, so what Darien was doing now was new to him.
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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Hermione sat lost in her own mind, this was the Minister of Magic they were sitting in front of. With him being Lucius Malfoy only made it worse for her. His family had hated her, she was mudblood, and they were pure blood. Her mind raced wthouthoughts of them taking Darien away, that she wouldn’t allow the right to be his mother anymore, that she was causing a scandal upon the wizarding world, and that Darien would be taken away for the deception she was causing.
“I won’t give him up.” Hermione said softly.
“You said you would have too?” Lucius asked. “What are you thinking? You think that I would take him away? Even though I probably could, I won’t. Darien has already bonded with both of you. I won’t sever that, it wouldn’t be in Darien’s best interest.”
I chose you, I could have picked anyone, I had several different visions of different fathers, I wanted you, and you always protected me when I needed it in spite of myself. I chose you, because you never treated me famous, you never let my fame interfere with your feelings towards me, even if you did hate me times. There were a few times I hated you, but I saw something in you. Your loyalty holds no bounds, you let nothing stand in your way, and your honor is the same. I love those traits about you, and I would honored if you allow me to stay your son.
Hermione sat lost in her own mind, this was the Minister of Magic they were sitting in front of. With him being Lucius Malfoy only made it worse for her. His family had hated her, she was mudblood, and they were pure blood. Her mind raced wthouthoughts of them taking Darien away, that she wouldn’t allow the right to be his mother anymore, that she was causing a scandal upon the wizarding world, and that Darien would be taken away for the deception she was causing.
“I won’t give him up.” Hermione said softly.
“You said you would have too?” Lucius asked. “What are you thinking? You think that I would take him away? Even though I probably could, I won’t. Darien has already bonded with both of you. I won’t sever that, it wouldn’t be in Darien’s best interest.”
I chose you, I could have picked anyone, I had several different visions of different fathers, I wanted you, and you always protected me when I needed it in spite of myself. I chose you, because you never treated me famous, you never let my fame interfere with your feelings towards me, even if you did hate me times. There were a few times I hated you, but I saw something in you. Your loyalty holds no bounds, you let nothing stand in your way, and your honor is the same. I love those traits about you, and I would honored if you allow me to stay your son.
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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truthfully, I didn’t do my homework on several occasions just so you would talk to me that way, so I knew what it felt like to have a parent scold me, not harshly, but in a manner that you knew they loved you. This was the reason I picked you to be my mother, because I saw exactly what you had inside, and I loved that.
truthfully, I didn’t do my homework on several occasions just so you would talk to me that way, so I knew what it felt like to have a parent scold me, not harshly, but in a manner that you knew they loved you. This was the reason I picked you to be my mother, because I saw exactly what you had inside, and I loved that.
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June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Janus seems to be an intersting new character.