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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh gods.... i do so love this.
the premise is wonderful and the way
you portray the two of them is just perfect.
i found myself laughing at this last chapter.
too funny, by half. now why can\'t i get shoved up
against a wall and ravishe Sev Severus in such
a manner? some girls have all the luck!!!
anxiously awaiting more.
~blessings~
ldf
the premise is wonderful and the way
you portray the two of them is just perfect.
i found myself laughing at this last chapter.
too funny, by half. now why can\'t i get shoved up
against a wall and ravishe Sev Severus in such
a manner? some girls have all the luck!!!
anxiously awaiting more.
~blessings~
ldf
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet and funny. Loved the line, \"the territory did indeed realise it had been claimed.\" Can\'t wait to see the relationship build and looking forward to them circumventing the boys plans!!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I somehow missed this chapter earlier this week and was so delighted to discover it tonight... what delicious dessert. I love the idea of plotting Hermione and Severus, the humor is delicous and I can easily imagine all of the things the boyz will come up with to distract SS/HG.
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, since I made your acquaintance with the whole round robin thing, I started working my way through your fics, and I have to tell you how VERY MUCH I\'m enjoying them. I love your dry humor and witty observations. I know that I haven\'t laughed out loud so delightedly at much else...period. You definitely have a gifr thr this.
Now, about this specific story...I love how you create that tension about how to play the game. And the general confusion of Severus, poor dear. I love Hermione in all your stories, but there is something both strong and vulnerable about her all at once in this one, and that is magical. Adds a poignant note to the humor, and I commend you on it. Quite an achievement.
Now, about this specific story...I love how you create that tension about how to play the game. And the general confusion of Severus, poor dear. I love Hermione in all your stories, but there is something both strong and vulnerable about her all at once in this one, and that is magical. Adds a poignant note to the humor, and I commend you on it. Quite an achievement.
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve found another of Shiv\'s stories! *jumps around exitedly and grins*
I can\'t even begin to tell you how much i\'m enjoying this! (but here\'s a benchmark amount, maybe even more than dirty deeds!)
Incredibly well written, and with the kind of wit that makes me alternately want to fall of my chair in hysterics and sob at the fact i\'ll never be so good!
I\'m LOVING \'your\' Severus- gadding about with all those women, teehee!
Awating a new chapter, and in awe as ever,
***Seva***
I can\'t even begin to tell you how much i\'m enjoying this! (but here\'s a benchmark amount, maybe even more than dirty deeds!)
Incredibly well written, and with the kind of wit that makes me alternately want to fall of my chair in hysterics and sob at the fact i\'ll never be so good!
I\'m LOVING \'your\' Severus- gadding about with all those women, teehee!
Awating a new chapter, and in awe as ever,
***Seva***
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I swear, I don\'t know whether I so enjoy reading your work because of the deft way you present dialogue, emotion and (when we\'re very lucky) some lovely and creatively presented smut -- lemons, if you prefer -- or if I enjoy reading your stuff because of the absofreakinglutely hilarious way you say things.
The whole \"the territory did indeed realise it had been claimed, and was tentatively pleased about this, although it was reserving final judgement\" had me laughing hard enough to cause consternation in other parts of my house, especially because I couldn\'t quite explain what was tickling me so.
Do carry on; I can\'t wait to read about the territory making its final decision (and doing the hinted at marking for itself)!
The whole \"the territory did indeed realise it had been claimed, and was tentatively pleased about this, although it was reserving final judgement\" had me laughing hard enough to cause consternation in other parts of my house, especially because I couldn\'t quite explain what was tickling me so.
Do carry on; I can\'t wait to read about the territory making its final decision (and doing the hinted at marking for itself)!
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating one of my fave Shiv stories. A rose to you.
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7... It is so nice to see the 2 of them so determined to \'mark\' what is their\'s!!! I really am curious to see what Harry & Ron have in store for them, something devious I\'m sure;-) Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Shiv, you\'ve done it again.
\"And that woman had better be her, or bloody murder would be done. \" What a wonderful line.
As always lusting in anticipation of updates. Jeanette
\"And that woman had better be her, or bloody murder would be done. \" What a wonderful line.
As always lusting in anticipation of updates. Jeanette
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The sheer brilliance of lines like this: \"soppier, probably, as he had gallons of unused soppiness just waiting to be used up on the right woman.\" is why I love your work so much. Fabulous!